Yes, peach's head sucks, but I can't put my finger on what it is exactly, therefor I can't fix it.
C&C!
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| Posted by: Fez Nov 1 2009, 12:32 PM |
| Yes, peach's head sucks, but I can't put my finger on what it is exactly, therefor I can't fix it. C&C! |
| Posted by: Demonlemon Nov 1 2009, 12:33 PM |
| it looks quite excellent |
| Posted by: Funky Nov 1 2009, 12:57 PM |
| Looks good so far |
| Posted by: Shyguy Grey Nov 1 2009, 01:08 PM |
| It seems like it needs more definition where his head meets the body. Right now they kinda blend together. The arm/glove facing us may also need some work, but it's mainly the glove. It looks like an oven mit. |
| Posted by: Fez Nov 1 2009, 03:59 PM |
| Luigi has been added. I'm still working on the arm/hand and the neck. |
| Posted by: Ludwig22 Nov 1 2009, 04:04 PM |
| tbh, Luigi's legs look a little...close together? |
| Posted by: Outrage Nov 1 2009, 04:27 PM |
| It looks very similar to Dex's Mario sheet... |
| Posted by: Fez Nov 1 2009, 04:43 PM | ||
hmm, I hadn't compared them before, but I guess they are slightly similar. I had no intent of doing this. I had no refrence when spriting this besides official artwork. |
| Posted by: Mecha the Slag Nov 1 2009, 05:00 PM |
| yeah Luigi needs a bit more room for his legs (in height not in width) |
| Posted by: Fender Nov 1 2009, 05:26 PM |
| these are nice, the eyebrows make them look angry |
| Posted by: Fez Nov 1 2009, 06:52 PM |
| I believe I've fixed most of the issues. EDIT: added new stuff. |
| Posted by: ~Dimentio~ Nov 2 2009, 07:10 PM |
| I think they all look good so far, keep up the good work! |
| Posted by: Slamman Nov 3 2009, 01:41 AM |
| They look nice, I like the style so far. I hope to see a full sheet of this soon! |
| Posted by: Fez Nov 6 2009, 11:17 AM |
| Last stand. need some assistance with these! |