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It`s pretty good, but it needs alot of work.
Wario- Needs a more greedy look, you anti anliasied the grey wrong, the blue on wario`s eyes is too dark, the overalls on Wario look blocky, his arms are too dark, the blue on Wario`s gloves is too dark, the shoes on both Wario and Waluigi should be more pointy, nose needs a third shade, stache needs work, the thickness of Wario`s eyebrows looks odd, no "W" on Warios head(alot of people get that wrong <_<), buttons looks odd and is missing yellow strap, teeth need work, need a better pallete for yellow and purple, outline is too dark and the grey should be darker like Mario`s. *sweat*
Now for Waluigi- Looks like he is looking up, chin needs to be longer, feet need work, need better grey, orange, and purple pallete, darker outline and darker grey, the upside down L looks odd, stache needs work, nose needs a third shade and needs work, needs a more greedy look, the white part on his head is too big, there should be a blue around his eye not purple :P, and I think that`s all.
Well, you asked for C+C XD
lawl, make a sheet? It`s not that good yet :P So, slow down there buckaroo XD
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Hmph...what a fool...
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| QUOTE (Starpower @ Jul 18 2006, 06:35 PM) | | Wario- Needs a more greedy look, you anti anliasied the grey wrong, the blue on wario`s eyes is too dark, the overalls on Wario look blocky, his arms are too dark, the blue on Wario`s gloves is too dark, the shoes on both Wario and Waluigi should be more pointy, nose needs a third shade, stache needs work, the thickness of Wario`s eyebrows looks odd, no "W" on Warios head(alot of people get that wrong <_<), buttons looks odd and is missing yellow strap, teeth need work, need a better pallete for yellow and purple, outline is too dark and the grey should be darker like Mario`s. *sweat* |
I edited Mario to make Wario, and I was trying to keep it under 16 colors becasue I don't have M&L pallet. Greedy look? I don't think so, atleast for me, he doesn't look that greedy. W on the head, heh, I try to make a real sprite that looks like the real Wario, and I don't care about the style as much as I care for the character. Oh, that yellow dot, I noticed it in the 3D Wario, but when I make a small sprite of him, a tiny little dot shouldn't be made in the sprite, because it's too small.
| QUOTE (Starpower @ Jul 18 2006, 06:35 PM) | | Now for Waluigi- Looks like he is looking up, chin needs to be longer, feet need work, need better grey, orange, and purple pallete, darker outline and darker grey, the upside down L looks odd, stache needs work, nose needs a third shade and needs work, needs a more greedy look, the white part on his head is too big, there should be a blue around his eye not purple :P, and I think that`s all. |
Chin needs to be longer?why? he isn't going to kiss the floor you know. As I said again I don't have the right pallet, and Waluigi's shoes colors are light, not dark. | QUOTE (Starpower @ Jul 18 2006, 06:35 PM) | | Well, you asked for C+C XD |
I'm sure I did, now do you mind if I commented on your Waluigi and Wario sprites, cuz I saw lots of flaws, same thing here.
| QUOTE (Starpower @ Jul 18 2006, 06:35 PM) | | It`s pretty good, but it needs alot of work. |
| QUOTE (Starpower @ Jul 18 2006, 06:35 PM) | | lawl, make a sheet? It`s not that good yet :P So, slow down there buckaroo XD |
What a great fat liar you are.  you said it's pretty good, then it's not that good, then called me a buckaroo. You know, just because you sprite in M&L style for a long time doesn't mean you are that great, just stop braging about being the best Wario and Waluigi in M&L style spriter.
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| QUOTE (Slash @ Jul 18 2006, 03:04 PM) | I edited Mario to make Wario, and I was trying to keep it under 16 colors becasue I don't have M&L pallet. Greedy look? I don't think so, atleast for me, he doesn't look that greedy. W on the head, heh, I try to make a real sprite that looks like the real Wario, and I don't care about the style as much as I care for the character. Oh, that yellow dot, I noticed it in the 3D Wario, but when I make a small sprite of him, a tiny little dot shouldn't be made in the sprite, because it's too small.
Chin needs to be longer?why? he isn't going to kiss the floor you know. As I said again I don't have the right pallet, and Waluigi's shoes colors are light, not dark.
I'm sure I did, now do you mind if I commented on your Waluigi and Wario sprites, cuz I saw lots of flaws, same thing here.
What a great fat liar you are. you said it's pretty good, then it's not that good, then called me a buckaroo. You know, just because you sprite in M&L style for a long time doesn't mean you are that great, just stop braging about being the best Wario and Waluigi in M&L style spriter. |
By longer I mean one pixel.
And what`s your problem? I`m not bragging. I`m just saying it need works before you hurry up and make a sheet. Buckaroo isn`t something bad, it`s just another word for buddy. And what the heck? I never "bragged", you asked for C+C which means comments and critism. You should expect that once you say it. I`m just trying to help sheesh <_< I was just stating out the flaws. Is that so wrong?
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