Discuss your original characters and stories, ORIGINAL, NOT FAN

Well, here's a character list:

BAM!

Excelect
1. Mikos
2. Rumiko
3. Tencin
4. Usula
5. Nioles
6. King Elka
7. Faeora
8. *Unnamed Hintani Elder
9. *Unnamed Creatos King
10. *Unnamed Islander
11. Haru
12. Azalos

Crimson Edge
13. Jukia
14. Tomo
15. Todam
16. Rinamu
17. Artemis
18. Kei
19. Janette
20. Nami
21. Aylia

Unused characters
22. Esperius
23. Hoyalen
24. Tobias
25. Manker
26. Ember (old... VERRY old)

Inactive, Old and Stupid characters...
27. General Leon
28. The Hood (Oh, god)
29. Noit Curtsed
30. The Blackness

You don't have to list characters, you can just talk about them or your stories...
Gimme a minute and I'll post a bit about those two stories and about some of the unused (and stupid) characters

This post has been edited by AppleQueso on Aug 31 2006, 07:49 PM

I have a few characters in my "Toodles Team." Here they are:

Toodles the Horse: Well, you all know Toodles already. He's the most loyal friend you will ever have, but he can be kinda slow at times. If you're around Toodles, he will constantly crack you up! For some reason, he wears a pink bow on his tail.

Bert Stein: A scientific genius, and Toodles the Horse's best friend. Bert has known Toodles for many years. Bert constantly is creating new inventions, though very few of them work the first time. Bert is kind of eccentric, and he's also very up-tight, which can create problems with his next-door neighbor...

Carl Bartholomew Flobberwatson: Carl is a miner, and a recent college graduate. He is rather sarcastic, but has a good heart inside. He is also very good friends with Toodles and Bert. Carl usually is tests Bert's new inventions, but as they rarley work, he doesn't always like that job!

Lloyd Lester Lloyd: Lloyd is Bert Stein's annoying (and overweight) next-door neighboor. He talks very loud and has a fierce lisp that causes him to spit when he says the letter "s." Lloyd is blissfully unaware of the fact that no one likes him, and he thinks he is Bert's best friend. He also likes to give everyone he meets a "pet name" such as Berty, or Horsey.

Those aren't all of my characters, but they are the major ones. Maybe I'll post some pictures of them on here sometime.

This post has been edited by Toodles Team on Aug 31 2006, 07:58 PM

Rylant.

No I will not discuss his story or anything else about him.

Uh, I think you guys already know about Garth and Lantz...I guess i'll tell you about some helper characters from the story then.

Sally Fava (Arabian Noons)
Jack Flywright (Future Mediocre/Back To The Future: Knight's Cut Re-release)
Queeshod (French Men Tell No Tales)
Minya (Super Ninja Fighting GOGOGO)

They help out Garth and Lantz in various time periods.

Okay, here's some pics (Sorry they're so huge):

Toodles and Bert:
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/tood...am/scan0001.jpg

Carl and Lloyd:
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/tood...am/scan0002.jpg

Nyuuu. See if I can remember... Yeah, I always had to play male characters when I first started RPing with my friends because they'd always call dibs on all the available female characters. So all I ever created when I started using my imagination were females. xD

From ancient old RPs with my friends:
1. Miyo
2. Marin
3. Eiko
4. Kia
5. Kayo
6. Kashii
7. Sasaki
8. Maori
9. Catra
10. Kirie-hime
11. Tatsura
12. Serianna
13. Pep
14. Mindie
15. Seishou
16. Cally
17. Daeve
18. Sehase
19. Sayuri
20. Mori
21. Taname
22. Masako
23. Mihiko (I gave her to AQ)

There are a lot more I don't remember, but those were frequently used.... I'm serious.

Ok so Saturnian Kitty:
24. Daishimi
25. Ril
26. Nanase
27. Kirin
28. Junta
29. Shiro

Several others in that story recycled from the old RP with my friends...

Unnamed Project 1:
30. Mirei
31. Riann
32. Vale
33. Lelunae
34. Satrine

Unnamed Project 2:
35. Jima
36. Jaren
37. Tana
38. Mora
39. Aizulielle
40. Malenka
41. Karie
42. Kamati
43. Raneru
44. Usael
45. Eilune
46. Orure
47. Marahi or Rahimu/Mahiru (one being that splits into two)

Never used but I made them anyway:
48. Natsume
49. Kouji
50. Tori
51. Amilly
52. Melee
53. Mashenko


I'm sick of typing. I'll do more as they come to mind. Probably.

K...RZZ...ZZZZ LUI..GI KRZZ

If you're refering to E. Gadd, he was not inspiration for Bert at all. (If you look at the pic and really think about the name, the inspiration should be obvious.)

I know Albert Einstien, but the stuff about the gadgets are what made me post that.

I haven't nessicarly finished their designs yet(one of em is in scraps on DA, kinda old), but once I finish their designs and learn how to animate(and sprite again), I'm gonna like...


Do stuff with them.

This post has been edited by RageMario on Aug 31 2006, 08:55 PM

I'm coming up with something besides Press Start that has a less weirdo name and isn't Kenshin. I won't change my name or anything but yea. I'll be sure to post him though

I have 100+, but they are just usually character design ideas.

I only have 5 I'm 100% satisfied with:

Hezues Coma
Filshire Hemrocke
Rache Rahe
Tar L. Finch
Vial Ranavar

(Note that each name has some kind of reference to death, or an object/condition that can lead to death. Ironically, they are all good guys)

This post has been edited by Sergeant Jinpen on Aug 31 2006, 09:04 PM

My characters are kinda clones of Mario characters:

Mr.Mario:The hero of the Flower Kingdom whose birth cirtificate was lost 20 minutes after it was printed, as a result everyone forgot his first name and had to be called by his surname, the fact his last name is mario and he is a plumber is all a quincidence.

Mr.Luigi:brother of Mr.Mario

Mr.Wario:an evil geniuse gelous of Mr.Dr.Mario sucscess

Mr.Waluigi:???

Princess Post:Princess of the flower Knigdom, kindof a sports addict who one day made a pong style tennis tornament and had here champion"Mr.mario" take on MFGG's Kingdom

Frog:Flower headed resident of the Flower Kingdom.

Pajiflum "Space Pirate Extrodionaire" was a character both Someguy and I developed.

He's a moonstruck yet civilized space pirate with a kingly guise who goes on to try to conquer the universe to impress his dead wife who stated that he "wasn't assertive enough".

I don't really want to tell anymore because he makes his star debut in Super Mario Land 4 (if it ever gets finished).

That reminds me of one of my old characters and tediz at the same time.

Anyway, First Generation:
Marjir - My first character. Like toodles, he was a good friend, though a bit slow. He had redeeming qualities, including being a skinny cow, mechanical devices and drawing. He was able to use his wrench to open any door, which caused problems.. for his homeland, which was rich in resources.
Thunder Glacier - The big bad bully. He was an alligator who had the cravings for a cor, nd Marjir was definently no exception. Marjir would make mistakes, and Thunder would take advantage of them. Marjir never actually faught Thunder (It had a comic), Thunder eventually spelled his own doom by the end of the comic.
Quita-la - Marjir's sister. She had the power of heart, who used quintessense to power machinery. She was the reason why Terrace Village (Their homeland) was running normaly. If something wrent wrong to depress her, everything would fall with her.
Cat-Ta-sophie - A psychicsexy cat/fawn (Actually, a fawn with cat ears) looking character. She worked for thunder glacier, and used her looks to succumb Marjir into a trap. Eventually, she outsmarted Glacier and took the resources for herself. Eventually, she was defeated by everyone in Terrance Village by the climax of the story which boosted Quita's quintessense to unreached levels.

Second Generation:
Ashurasonic - Strictly a sonic recolor.
Ashurasonic mk-2 - Metal ashurasonic. He wore clothes around him like vincent.
Ashurasonic mk-3 - Mega metal ashurasonic, he was evil and was ugly as hell
Ashurasonic XG - A recolor of mk-3
Ashurasonic Diethel - Celebi/Lyserg/Cute alien combination
Ashurak - Jak meets Diethel, a youngster with massive platforming ability.
Ashurak 2.0 - Jak meets Diethel, but older. He has reached puberty, which explained his look.
Ashurak 3.0 - Jak meets Diethel, but is now an adult.

He said ORIGINAL, not FAN characters.

I actually catalogued a bunch of the characters I made from 3rd grade all the way up until now and I think I had around 500 when you take out the throwaways.

Only about 100 or so are still being used actively.

Off the top of my head...

Glenn
Granpa
Greliz
Alita
Wallace
Devil Spit

Baron Von Boneburn
Shambles
Snopes
Armorclad Joe
Doctor Mort
Nurse Carrie
Horatio

Lobster Malone
Hoot
Holler
Sloth Hitman #421
Shlug

The Puppet King

Pedro

Madame Blue
Arbor Nightshade

I'll put some info on them later.

This post has been edited by Greliz on Sep 1 2006, 01:25 PM

Luigi's Game, even though it's a fangame, is actually the second installment of a fiction trilogy I've been working on for a while. I can't say too much about it because that'd completely ruin the game's plot, but I've worked a huge deal of original characters into it.

(ignore the shyguys and other fan-related stuff)

These guys have had so many story-changes I'm not sure exactly what I'd do with them if I was thinking about making comics with them now. None of these guys have names that I'm happy with.

1) The main character, a robot, previously called Powerbot but now tentatively named "Bot" until I think of something more creative. In the latest version of the story, he's one of many robots created by humans to compete in a series of racing/battling tournaments. He wants to be the best racer there is, but sometimes he is forced to fight. (other incarnations had him coming to earth from a space-colony of robots to protect humans, or being created by a human with the purpose of saving the earth a-la dragonball styled long drawn out battles).

2) This guy was originally on Bot's "team" (called B.O.T.S. omg) and came from the same space colony he did. Now he's pretty much another robot created by another human for competition, but he's kind of a friendly rival and they team up sometimes when they have to do real fighting. I've never settled on a name for him.

3) This guy piloted the B.O.T.S. transports, and was originally shaped like some kind of flying saucer robot who morphed into the vehicles. :) Now he's pretty much like #2, a friendly rival.

4) This Ninja Robot, again does not have a name, but he's the typical "violent rival guy who hates the hero but teams up with him sometimes". Not much more to say about him other than that I created him by accident when I was drawing the original Bot and messed up. :]

5) A random other robot I wanted to put in the story somewhere.

6) This little guy wins the first race that Bot enters, because they're all too busy fighting and he sneaks past to the finish line. :)

7) An animal, which may or may not be related to the story somehow. It's kind of like a cat/fox/squirrel hybrid.

SOME MORE OLD PICTURES