M&L sprite attempt

[img=http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9596/monkeymlattemptns8.th.png] go ahead make fun of me and my poor sprites these are my first M&L sprites

I don't see anything on that page, just a blank frame but it links right back to this page.

dunno it works for me

It's only one sprite

yah i'm working on the others i just wanted criticizm

Doesn't look M&L at all. Did you use Starpower's tutorial?

i used boomansions

Starpower > Boomansion

not even close to a crappy ml sprite

stop streching the sprite. make one topic full of crap no one hundred.

My gosh. That's not even close to M&L at all. I would recommend you placing that sprite next to Mario. You see how Mario is? He's in a "sprite view" called overworld view. Overworld view is sort of like a sky's view of the character but still sort of facing frontward. I would suggest looking at other sprites. Start with more simplier characters like a Voltorb or a Star.

If you need any more help, you can look at my tutorial on this site. I'm not trying to sound braggish or anythin but it might help you alot better. It gives you all of the rules of M&L, alot BM missed out on his tutorial. Read carefully.

Now that that is said and done, good luck and practice!

Shawn <3

This post has been edited by Starpower on Sep 2 2006, 08:47 PM

closer to SMB (Original) style than M&L style.

NO way near M&L!

but how long you'v been spriteing?
It's a Bad sprite yes, but that depends on how long you been in to sprites!

Not really, look at Starpower in 2004; his sprite was awesome!

For the sprite, do you REALLY think that's M&L ?

Here's a good tutorial from good old Starpower!
Tutorial of M&L (Yay Starpower!)
Take a good look at the outlines and colors...
Your monkey is nowhere close...

I'm really not seeing how you could think this was ML style.

Me niether... Dark Kamek, do you REALLY think it fits the style?

I am SO putting that in my sig

honestly i didn't at all i just wanted criticism cuz i suck at spriting i've been doing it for 3 days so that's why i suck

oh and spritanium your sig is funny with my sucky sprite keep it

It sounds like your really negative about the subject. No one wants to hurt your feelings, they want to help you. My advice...first try recolors (don't post them), then edits. Qhen you've mastered those, then go on to customs. Hope I'm helping.

But yeah, the sig does look cool

sig makes me laugh i think after it should come uber noob attempt of M&L

Yeah, did you read my previous post? If not, use the advice.