Tragedy Anne version 2., .two.dos.zwei.deux.[Updated in color!]

EDIT: A colored thing... It's SO not done. The eye is very out of place, and I'm gonna fix that. She also looks a little weird. It's been ages since I've last used my tablet, so I had to get back "in the swing of things." I used Gimp, which I'm pretty bad at anyway, but I'm getting used to it, because I don't have photoshop anymore. *tear*


Comments/criticism, please?





CHARCOAL'D.

Mmhmm, so... Another one where the scan quality is sort of crappy. Ignore the oddly-drawn mouth, my charcoal was getting dull.

I fixed the coat, so it's not so odd anymore, and it's fullbody, so it'll be better for a ref.

Colored Anne coming soon.

This post has been edited by Deaths In Birmingham on Jan 16 2007, 10:56 PM

Anne's [temporary] backstory:
Anne [insert last name here] is wanted for several cases of hospital murder. She was forced to resign from her job as a nurse in order to escape everyone that wanted her dead. At the time of these murders, she was 23, just out of medical school, and that was it. She had no real rhyme or reason... She just hated people. The people in this hospital seemed to her to be unbearable, so she did what any... self-respecting... urge-ridden nurse would... or could... or shouldn't... do. She killed ten people. Five patients, three maintenance workers, one doctor, and a secretary. Not long after she realized what she had done, she fled. She fled from her job, her family, her city, her country, her life. She found herself in Helsinki, Finland. It was there that she would mend her shattered life and collect her thoughts for some four years. Now at the age of 27, she was ready to move on with her life... Only... She was being tracked throughout these four years, and she was forced back into hiding.

--That's all for now.--

Lovely.
Love the style, love the character, love her story. It's all just so... brilliant.
A colored version of your character still remains to be seen though : P

cool nicely made

Thanks, guys!! I got home early from final exams, so I'm going to work on a colored version. :]

There's something that I need to ask though...
Why Helsinki? : P

I was born there, and Finland's just... really awesome. XD

Oh, cool.
And I agree, Finland kicks ass. XD

haha, it really does. I hope to go back this summer and stay with some relatives. Gah, I must work on my Finnish!!

[post hereby reserved for when I finish the colored one.]

I love the backstory. It seems very mature and it is also well written and easily understood.

As for the drawing, awesome work there. I can't draw with charcoal for beans and you make it look so wonderful.

thanks so much!!

Eh, I've just been practicing with it, because we were doing self-portraits in charcoal and white charcoal. (And 'cause I stole a charcoal pencil from the art room. Mwahaha.)

There should be a backstory update thing pretty soon. I've been writing.

Okay, so I added a sort of colored version. It's not full-body, but the jacket is the only thing with a lot of color, anyway.