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It's a start, but not completely there yet. The legs look completly 2D. The shoe on the right leg looks like a cinderblock tied to his leg. To achive a more shoe type look to it I would actually change the angle, in this case. If you made the shoe go off to the right a little more I belive it would look better, instead of looking at the shoe dead on. I'd make the left leg a teeny bit longer too. But the face is nice looking (exept the stach, make the left side of it not stick up as much) and the body looks good too. You're getting close, just remember anabouut those angles and puportions!
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