Goomba Sprite Comp., Continues!

Kritter:
Since Doc W. wasn't around to choose this competition, I am doing it since i'm pretty sure I was runner up. The competition is Goombas since the majority wanted it, and if you have any complaints about that, please forward them to my fist on the way to your face. This isn't exactly a repeat, since the last time we did them, we did "Mushroom People" which means there were Toads in the comp as well as Goombas. First things first.

Winner - Dr. Wario
Runner Up - Kritter

I don't think you need a reference pic, you all know what Goombas look like. Off you go, get spriting. Should this competition allow things like Tanoombas and other Goomba's?

Yay...

Uh, who gave you the right to start this? [ In all seriousness. ] ..o.O..Either way, I have three things I wanna enter :

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4282190/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4197288/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4139620/
^ Last one has SSS Spoilers. ^

Heh, I made alot of goombaz lately, why let them go to waste?

you have no right too make this topic soab, only kritter or admins.. (or DOCW at first place but he doesn't show up :X)

We know that, don't get him insulted.

Full Sheet:


SumoGoom:



There's my two entries, they were posted in the topic before but posts were wiped.

What's everybody *****ing about? If anything, the guy did us a favor by restarting the topic.

Anyway, here was my SMW-styled entry (as I said on the old post, this can be seen on the SME2 logo):

Woo for Goombas.

Didn't you enter that last time?...This is a chance to do something NEW Jeff.

Didn't you enter that last time?...This is a chance to do something NEW Jeff.

If you mean "last time" as in the topic Kritter started that got wipped, yes I did...

If you mean "last time" as in the last time Goombas were in a contest, then no I didn't... I wasn't entered in that contest, I don't think (I did introduce this sprite a while back during a competition that had nothing to do with Goombas, so it wasn't an entry -- I was just looking for opinions). I'll probably make something else too, but in the meantime don't undergrade my sprite just because you've seen it before...

Didn't you enter that last time?...This is a chance to do something NEW Jeff.

If you mean "last time" as in the topic Kritter started that got wipped, yes I did...

If you mean "last time" as in the last time Goombas were in a contest, then no I didn't... I wasn't entered in that contest, I don't think (I did introduce this sprite a while back during a competition that had nothing to do with Goombas, so it wasn't an entry -- I was just looking for opinions). I'll probably make something else too, but in the meantime don't undergrade my sprite just because you've seen it before...

Ah, let me break it down.

If you mean "last time" as in the topic Kritter started that got wipped, yes I did...

No.

If you mean "last time" as in the last time Goombas were in a contest, then no I didn't... I wasn't entered in that contest, I don't think (I did introduce this sprite a while back during a competition that had nothing to do with Goombas,

It was mushroom people, Toads/Goombaz.

so it wasn't an entry -- I was just looking for opinions). I'll probably make something else too, but in the meantime don't undergrade my sprite just because you've seen it before...

I wouldn't, I would've said " I already rated it. " and maybe RERATED it.

I never entered that comp. The only time I ever displayed this sprite was during a comp that, once again, had nothing to do with goombas (I think it was the metalic comp). It was also in my sig for a while before I took it down, then again when I had the SME2 logo in my sig.

I never entered that comp. The only time I ever displayed this sprite was during a comp that, once again, had nothing to do with goombas (I think it was the metalic comp). It was also in my sig for a while before I took it down, then again when I had the SME2 logo in my sig.

Ah okay, I'll start rating now.

EDIT : Woah what the hell!? I dunno why it came out like this, sorry.

Pictomancer : Teh Shoe Goomba
Style Opinion / Rating - Stiff -

o.0
Pose - o.0
Colors - Good, I love that green.

9.
Shading - Wow, very original, at

least I think so. 10.
Overall - 8
( Great! )
( Any Improvments I Advise :

Isn't the shoe alittle too long

going upwards? )

SP : Sheet
Style Opinion / Rating - o.0 - o.0
Pose - o.0
Colors - Okie dokie. 9.
Shading - Same. 8.
Overall - 7.1
( Good...But... )
( Any Improvments I Advise : In

the close up the Goomba's eyes

look completely

screwed/drugged. )

SP : Sumogoom
Style Opinion / Rating - Stiff -

o.0
Pose - o.0
Colors - Same.
Shading - Same.
Overall - 8
( Better than the ones in the

sheet, the shape is beter and the

eyes are a BIT better, very

Warioish. )
( Any Improvments I Advise :

Mmm I can't say anything.. )

Jeff : Goomba/Walking
Style Opinion / Rating - Walking

- Not so hot, two frame walking

animation, =\.
Pose - Hmmm...Well for one that

Goomba is WAAAAAY too round,

if it's based on the SMW one, it

is still to damn round, the SMW

had a eggish shape sorta.
Colors - The differentness from

the bottom and the top brown

give him a look as if he has a

beard, o.0.
Shading - Layers layers. 9.
Overall - 6
( Needs work. )
( Any Improvments I Advise :
1 : Roundness has to be fixed.
2 : Colors of either the bottom

or the top need to be changed so

they look better next to each

other.
3 : You can try making more

frames.
4 : Eyebrows, too think/blocky,

give them a shade of brown so

they stick out more, =).
5 : Teeth, too blocky.
)

Citrusponge : Sheet
Style Opinion / Rating - o.0 - o.0
Poses :
STAND WALK : Cool, but the

sides are alittle TOO droopy for

my liking, his eyes are cold,

cool. 7.9
SQUISHED KO : Hahahaha,

very good, I like the upsidedown

one, looks like he's screaming,

XDDD, this kinda chuckled me.

10.
SIDE MAP : Now the sides are

very well done, you can see that

he's slightly leaning foward,

and the MAP is like SMB3,

awesome, ^_^. 10.
PARAGOOMBA : Heh, I like the

side views, very much, now with

wings he kicks even more ass.
MISC : The...Uhm...How would

you say it..Unactive?..=p..( Gray One ) I shall give no rating, but the underwater one, DAMN YOU I WAS GONNA DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!....XD....Cool...Sc00baDiver thingy...4 (I rated both as one, the Gray Goomba got no rating and the Sc00bar would've gotten a nine.)
Colors - Hmmm, theres something

about your sprites that you can

tell if it's yours by the colors

too, very interesting....9.....
Shading - Good.
Overall - ROCK ON!!!..8.0
( Kick ass sheet. )
( Any Improvments I Advise : Hmm, maybe you can make the front view sides less droopy. )

<-- Joke entry, Micro-goomba

Klobber : Goomba
Style Opinion / Rating - Stiff - o.0
Pose - o.0
Colors - Okay. 7
Shading - Amazing. 10.
Overall - 6
( Good butttttt.... )
( Any Improvments I Advise : Why the hell does it look like he has a part of his head sliced off!?...[ Upper Left]...That kinda screwed it... )

Klobber : Teh Goombaz Wiff Helmet
Style Opinion / Rating - Walking? - o.0
Pose - If he's not walking then it looks totally screwed.
Colors - Great. 10.
Shading - EVEN MORE AMAZING!!!.....O_O......10...
Overall - 9
( Amazing! )
( Any Improvments I Advise : If he's just standing lower that damn foot, XD. )

[ Joke Review, =p. ]
Klobber : MircoGoomba
Style Opinion / Rating - Stiff - o.0
Pose - o.0
Colors - 10
Shading - 574848058
Overall - 48905890854855535358904
( =-O )
( Any Improvments I Advise : OJFODFJKOAJIOADF, MAEK A SHEET SANTA KLOBBBZ!1 )

Rex, it seems you're obsessed with the Enter button, XD.

No that first post I dunno what the hell happend, it was NOT LIKE THAT.

Bleh.

Pretty good but the feet look odd.