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Evil	Posted: Jun 6 2007, 12:15 PM
Regular Group: Members Posts: 769 Member No.: 1635 Joined: 12-November 05 Status: (0d)	I just finished my first sprite ever! Click here to see it! It's a sprite of my character. (It's enlarged to show depth in the many colors) I know I need a better image host, but Imageshack is down right now. Constructive Criticism please. I ignore rude comments (this sux, craptastic, ect.) so don't waste your time typing something nasty back. -------------------- I adopted a YoshBot!

Shanks	Posted: Jun 6 2007, 12:22 PM
MY TANK IS FIGHT Group: Members Posts: 3480 Member No.: 2357 Joined: 18-July 06 Status: (0d)	1. Do it pixel by pixel, not by freehand. 2. The light source doesn't make sense. 3. Shading looks lazily done. Good for a first, though. -------------------- Johari\|Nohari\|Ref THIS IS A LINK

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Posted: Jun 6 2007, 03:31 PM

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QUOTE (Shanks @ Jun 6 2007, 12:22 PM)

1. Do it pixel by pixel, not by freehand.
2. The light source doesn't make sense.
3. Shading looks lazily done.

Good for a first, though.

The lightsource definetly doesn't make sense, I took a second look at it and yeah, I noticed it. The shading took a while to do.

Thanks for the constructive criticism!

This post has been edited by Evil on Jun 6 2007, 03:32 PM

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