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Toad Sprite, My 2nd sprite, really good!

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Evil	Posted: Jun 7 2007, 02:36 PM
Regular Group: Members Posts: 769 Member No.: 1635 Joined: 12-November 05 Status: (0d)	I just finished up a Toad sprite, it is my second sprite ever created. Click this to see it! I thought I did a pretty good job on this. I especially liked the pallete I used, it sorta gives you a more realistic looking image. Constructive Criticism please! I listen! -------------------- I adopted a YoshBot!

Frogjester	Posted: Jun 7 2007, 02:42 PM
2 colours are all I need Group: Members Posts: 2251 Member No.: 2336 Joined: 15-July 06 Status: (0d)	Well I could properly give C+C if the image wasn't blown up more than 10 times it's size or something. The lines look a bit freehand(which isn't bad when done with effort) and his shape looks off. Some stuff is pillowed, and pillowing isn't that nice -------------------- My Cave Story style ref

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Posted: Jun 7 2007, 02:43 PM

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QUOTE (Frogjester @ Jun 7 2007, 02:42 PM)

Well I could properly give C+C if the image wasn't blown up more than 10 times it's size or something. The lines look a bit freehand(which isn't bad when done with effort) and his shape looks off. Some stuff is pillowed, and pillowing isn't that nice

I blew it up to show depth in colors. I'm not going to do that next time though.

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Posted: Jun 7 2007, 02:45 PM

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QUOTE (Evil @ Jun 7 2007, 02:43 PM)

I blew it up to show depth in colors. I'm not going to do that next time though.

Maybe include the original and then the big one?

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Shanks	Posted: Jun 7 2007, 02:46 PM
MY TANK IS FIGHT Group: Members Posts: 3480 Member No.: 2357 Joined: 18-July 06 Status: (0d)	Try not to pillow your sprites next time. As far as the lineart is, it's not bad. Only thing I see wrong with it is the head. The mushroom should be rounder and bigger. -------------------- Johari\|Nohari\|Ref THIS IS A LINK

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Posted: Jun 7 2007, 03:41 PM

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QUOTE (Shanks @ Jun 7 2007, 02:46 PM)

Try not to pillow your sprites next time. As far as the lineart is, it's not bad. Only thing I see wrong with it is the head. The mushroom should be rounder and bigger.

What do you mean by "pillowing" sprites?

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RelmM	Posted: Jun 7 2007, 03:53 PM
Surprise! Group: Members Posts: 9317 Member No.: 180 Joined: 11-December 03 Status: (0d)	http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/pillow.gif ^That's pillow shading. --------------------

PSI Guy	Posted: Jun 7 2007, 05:53 PM
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