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Metroid Prime: Lockdown (Comic), my new comic.

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KyleTH	Posted: Jul 14 2007, 07:36 AM
EPIC DRAMATIC LOOK ZOMG Group: Members Posts: 167 Member No.: 3881 Joined: 6-June 07 Status: (0d)	--------------------

Dispenser	Posted: Jul 14 2007, 07:40 AM
9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 Group: Members Posts: 4340 Member No.: 2993 Joined: 27-November 06 Status: (0d)	Wrong forum And great narration -------------------- Last seen lurking MFGG 2.0: March 16th 2012

quintorro	Posted: Jul 14 2007, 10:12 AM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 1228 Member No.: 1168 Joined: 16-June 05 Status: (0d)	Could you have changed up each panel a little? I know not much is happening, but they are all the same and it makes it look kinda bland. I agree with Canada Dry about the narration though. -------------------- Four weeks. Twenty papers. That's two dollars, plus tip.

Mechant	Posted: Jul 14 2007, 12:17 PM
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flipiberke	Posted: Jul 14 2007, 12:22 PM
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Guinea	Posted: Jul 15 2007, 07:02 AM
6 Group: Admins Posts: 8600 Member No.: 893 Joined: 15-March 05 Status: (0d)	Narration = great. However, this seems ridiculous to me: Samus's power-suit seems to be on low power, and she's dying. But for the sake of telling a story, she loads a 164 hours long video... =) No explanation needed, as this serves the story telling, but still, it's funny.

Mr. Mustafo	Posted: Jul 15 2007, 11:46 AM
Mandrill Mandrill. Group: Members Posts: 766 Member No.: 3228 Joined: 26-January 07 Status: (0d)	You need to finish, I want to know what happens. This post has been edited by Coelacanthus on Jul 16 2007, 11:25 AM -------------------- Ref by Max Rider.

KyleTH

Posted: Jul 16 2007, 10:57 AM

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QUOTE (Guinea @ Jul 15 2007, 07:02 AM)

Narration = great.

However, this seems ridiculous to me:
Samus's power-suit seems to be on low power, and she's dying.
But for the sake of telling a story, she loads a 164 hours long video... =)

No explanation needed, as this serves the story telling, but still, it's funny.

Nonononono...
Its not her at the period of time telling the story.
Y'know, like T.V shows, Where they Say something like
"This is the story of how I died blah blah blah".

I hope that makes sense >.>

This post has been edited by KyleTH on Jul 16 2007, 10:58 AM

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