MS Paint Doopliss Thing, with extra Mario, Vivian and bell!

This took a long time. It has no background exept for the stage and the bell. The wood for the stage was pretty painful. In my opinion, Vivian came out weird. Doopliss took the longest to make, with all the folds and shading and stuff. Anyway, need feedback, so tell me how good or how bad it is.

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I hate to break it to you, but this is pretty crappy

The purple thing's hat is nice, but everything else either uses too many basic shapes (Mario's (???) head) or is really jagged looking. While some of the shading is borderline okay, the perspective is still way off, and the floor looks like a brown lava lamp. You still have some stray lines, and to be honest, Mario (if that's who it's supposed to be) looks like total crap. You may want to try a more advanced graphics editing program (GIMP, paint.NET, Photoshop etc etc) and spend some more time actually making a background.

Well, yeah, but I can't use a better program because mum would kill me if I downloaded something without permission and she thinks Photoshop is a waste of money. So.

Not a good exuse. Anything you can do on Photoshop can be done on even paint with a little effort. The picture isnt to bad but it needs a lot of work. It looks like you were getting bored and rushed mario.

giving my two cents on this statement would be a waste of money

umm you people can do pretty good i mean way better in ms paint don't blame the program

it looks quite awkward, but there's something I like about the way Vivian and Doopliss look, even if it's a bit weird

try the GIMP, it's a Free Software alternative to Adobe Photoshop. http://www.gimp.org/
religious Photoshoppers whine about its interface because they're not used to it, but it's a very capable image editor.
if you are using Microsoft Windows, you can find an installer here: http://gimp-win.sourceforge.net/
You may also wish to look into Paint.NET.