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Sprite competition #115, Mario game mockups

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paper_man	Posted: Aug 23 2007, 09:44 PM
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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 09:46 PM

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To me, it looks a little off-color.

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paper_man	Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:01 PM
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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:02 PM

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QUOTE (paper_man @ Aug 23 2007, 08:01 PM)

yea, the clouds are basically what i am not happy with

Is that tottaly custom?

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paper_man	Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:13 PM
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Zephyra

Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:20 PM

Quite enticing I must say
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A preview of mario. enemies and tiles to come. And then, the mock-up

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:25 PM

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Here's a preveiw:

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:26 PM

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QUOTE (fujiko @ Aug 23 2007, 10:25 PM)

Here's a preveiw:

Background.

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Grant

Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:26 PM

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QUOTE (paper_man @ Aug 23 2007, 10:44 PM)

ok, i have been working on this for the comp for 2days now, i still need to add a hud etc......but i would like C+C of what i have so far!!

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Aren't the characters kind of huge compared to the blocks and pipes?

Maybe that's kind of the way it is in SPM for all I know, but it just looked a bit off to me.

Other than that, it looks quite good, though as others said the colors could perhaps use tweaking.

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'Tis a PM background. So?

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QUOTE (fujiko @ Aug 23 2007, 10:27 PM)

'Tis a PM background. So?

It's a god damn SPRITE competition.

You need to make everything yourself.

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:30 PM

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QUOTE (fujiko @ Aug 23 2007, 10:30 PM)

Read the whole topic.

Oh.

My apologies, my good sir.

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:35 PM

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QUOTE (Aaron Blade @ Aug 23 2007, 02:52 PM)

I needs to know if its good. The star in front of him is one of those star people. Not a starman.

I made it mostly empty to show off the custom background.

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:38 PM

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QUOTE (Grant @ Aug 23 2007, 08:26 PM)

It's not like that in SPM. The Goombas are about the same size as a ? Block, and the blocks shouldn't be so close to the ground.

The pipes are about right though.

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 10:42 PM

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QUOTE (Aaron Blade @ Aug 23 2007, 10:35 PM)

I needs to know if its good. The star in front of him is one of those star people. Not a starman.

I made it mostly empty to show off the custom background.

I think that's great. The only thing that sticks out is Mario's nose, I can't really put my finger on it, though.

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Posted: Aug 23 2007, 11:22 PM

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QUOTE (TheMarioManiac @ Aug 23 2007, 08:42 PM)

I think that's great. The only thing that sticks out is Mario's nose, I can't really put my finger on it, though.

It's completely outlined.

Is is clearly seperated from the face by the outlining.

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Zero Kirby	Posted: Aug 23 2007, 11:25 PM
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