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  Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:39 PM
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Episode #1
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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:48 PM
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Green bandit looks suprised.

Purple bandit= BG? I guess.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:49 PM
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needs work on the humor

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:50 PM
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Oh, nostalgia
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Is that ninji official or custom...

I have the feeling this needs credits

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:50 PM
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This isn't very funny.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:51 PM
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Here are the characters:
Andy: Green Bandit
Dizzy Guy: Blue Shy Guy
Goombobby: Goombario look-alike

And yes, I used BG as a cameo. I hope its okay with Peardian.

Credits: NO BODY
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Sorry, this is my first comic. headslap.gif

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 06:55 PM
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Andy really is a common name for bandits.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:01 PM
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This is terrible.

Just a couple of tips, don't stretch the space. Most of your text boxes go outside the panels, and you leave white space around it and it looks TERRIBLE.

SMBD? PDF? SMA? What the hell are you talking about? Before you use acronyms TELL USE WHAT THEY STAND FOR.

Try zooming in a bit every once in a while so the panels don't appear so static. When every panel looks basically the same, that is not good.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:03 PM
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Sigh, I don't think this is working out.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:04 PM
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Keep going, just be better.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:07 PM
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fujiko: Thanks for the support.
MegaTailzChao: I'll keep working on later strips. They will be better than these.
Everyone else: Use constructive criticism, please.

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM
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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM
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QUOTE (Xgoff @ Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM)
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Why?


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM
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QUOTE (Xgoff @ Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM)
rage will love this topic

His name will match his emotion.
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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:22 PM
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QUOTE (Pizza Mario @ Aug 29 2007, 07:18 PM)
His name will match his emotion.

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:29 PM
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QUOTE (MegaTailzChao @ Aug 29 2007, 07:01 PM)
This is terrible.

Just a couple of tips, don't stretch the space. Most of your text boxes go outside the panels, and you leave white space around it and it looks TERRIBLE.

SMBD? PDF? SMA? What the hell are you talking about? Before you use acronyms TELL USE WHAT THEY STAND FOR.

Try zooming in a bit every once in a while so the panels don't appear so static. When every panel looks basically the same, that is not good.

I'll improve everything in later issues.


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:50 PM
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Awesome


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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 07:52 PM
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Thanks! Here is a quickie that has nothing to do with the storyline:
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Credits:
Starpower
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Others are ripped.

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Posted: Aug 29 2007, 08:04 PM
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QUOTE (Yoshbert 1-Ups @ Aug 29 2007, 07:52 PM)
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Posted: Aug 30 2007, 02:23 PM
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I hope you like Episode #4 better than the other 3.

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