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another unworthy entry, for the sprite compo.

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seldeslim	Posted: Oct 9 2007, 08:52 PM
so good that its banned Group: Members Posts: 4186 Member No.: 2016 Joined: 15-April 06 Status: (0d)	This is what I have so far. OLDEST: OLDER: OLD: NEW: NEWER: NEWEST: This post has been edited by Fonki Bot on Oct 13 2007, 01:04 PM -------------------- Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE. also this is gato from new mfgg3 just in case you're wondering about my join date status you silly newbies

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:02 PM

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Hi there.

Anyway, needs shading, make the animation a bit slower, make a little less low-budget-looking.

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:05 PM

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QUOTE (fujiko @ Oct 9 2007, 07:02 PM)

Hi there.

Anyway, needs shading, make the animation a bit slower, make a little less low-budget-looking.

it is shaded.

@ Zero Kirby: you make me sad.... just for that I'm not criticizing your engine.

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Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE.

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:06 PM

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QUOTE (Fonki Bot @ Oct 9 2007, 07:05 PM)

it is shaded.

The shadow doesn't count as shading.

If it's shaded, it needs more contrast.

And again, don't bump a topic after only ten minutes, seeing as it seems you ignored that particular post in favor for crits.

If you think it's so unworthy, then don't bump the topic.

AND WHAT THE BLOODY HELL. I do NOT bump my engine after ten bloody minutes. I am telling you NOT TO BUMP AFTER TEN MINUTES. IT IS STUPID POINTLESS AND IS A WASTE OF SPACE.

You should have no reason to be upset at me just because I freaking said "NO SHORT BUMPS." I am teaching you what not to do if you want to be popular. Don't bite my head off.

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seldeslim

Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:12 PM

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QUOTE (Zero Kirby @ Oct 9 2007, 07:06 PM)

It's all cool.

BTW, not seeking popularity, just recognition.

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:14 PM

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QUOTE (Fonki Bot @ Oct 9 2007, 07:12 PM)

It's all cool.

BTW, not seeking popularity, just recognition.

It's just... that little "wah I not do this if you make me cry" post really pissed me off. It sounded like you were a little kid.

It's easier to get comments if you don't bump it every ten minutes. I'm just saying that. Sorry for being rude and derailing the topic.

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seldeslim

Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:16 PM

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QUOTE (Zero Kirby @ Oct 9 2007, 07:14 PM)

Its all cool.

fixed some stuff, BTW.

user posted image

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:17 PM

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QUOTE (Zero Kirby @ Oct 9 2007, 10:14 PM)

welp since thats settled ill just do some minor sweeping up in here then (i was considering locking at first, but I figured I'd let it resolve itself :P)

also I'd put'd some contrast in your colors, as Zero Kirby stated. :V

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:22 PM

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QUOTE (RageMario @ Oct 9 2007, 07:17 PM)

I did, I noticed dark shades of purple are hard to shade in.

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seldeslim	Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:44 PM
so good that its banned Group: Members Posts: 4186 Member No.: 2016 Joined: 15-April 06 Status: (0d)	fixed the hair a bit. -------------------- Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE. also this is gato from new mfgg3 just in case you're wondering about my join date status you silly newbies

Zero Kirby	Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:48 PM
Well, your local psychic is off to visit your mother! Group: Members Posts: 6252 Member No.: 2501 Joined: 15-August 06 Status: (0d)	To me it doesn't look like anything's changed. If the colors look too similar, they're not contrasted enough. Make the shaded color DARKER for more contrast. -------------------- Falcon Punch is the result of the Sun heating fists. It drives the Blue Falcon. Heating causes destruction of water into the pain, where it then hurts, creating rain. Rain creates flowing water in tears, which can then be converted into other forms through more pain. My Ref - Full Body Ref (minus the badass hat) Visit Just Another Just Another Day - The Webcomic! Super Mario Zero: Game Status (RAZZ Y U STEALING MAH FORMAT BRO) Mario Object: Pretty much finished! Enemy Objects: [\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|--] Just gonna add Spinies, Bullet Bills and Cheep Cheeps! Boss Fights: None in progress. General Engine: [\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|-] Ranking System Complete! Gonna add pipes! Levels Complete: [\|---------] Haven't even finished the tutorial!

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Posted: Oct 9 2007, 09:59 PM

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QUOTE (Zero Kirby @ Oct 9 2007, 07:48 PM)

To me it doesn't look like anything's changed.

If the colors look too similar, they're not contrasted enough. Make the shaded color DARKER for more contrast.

how about now?

user posted image

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Posted: Oct 10 2007, 12:22 AM

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Pretty good job!

Unfortunately, I still don't see particularly much shading, at least not obvious shading, and the shadow at the bottom looks rather oblong. Otherwise, though, well done.

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seldeslim

Posted: Oct 10 2007, 05:13 PM

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QUOTE (Grant @ Oct 9 2007, 10:22 PM)

Pretty good job!

Unfortunately, I still don't see particularly much shading, at least not obvious shading, and the shadow at the bottom looks rather oblong. Otherwise, though, well done.

well, yeah. I'm planning to fix the shadow.

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Posted: Oct 10 2007, 05:19 PM

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LISTEN

The shadow is OK.

THE SHADING IS NOT.

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Posted: Oct 10 2007, 05:22 PM

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QUOTE (fujiko @ Oct 10 2007, 03:19 PM)

LISTEN

The shadow is OK.

THE SHADING IS NOT.

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I did, I noticed dark shades of purple are hard to shade in.

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Shanks	Posted: Oct 10 2007, 05:34 PM
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seldeslim	Posted: Oct 10 2007, 10:22 PM
so good that its banned Group: Members Posts: 4186 Member No.: 2016 Joined: 15-April 06 Status: (0d)	fixed the shadow and shading even more. -------------------- Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE. also this is gato from new mfgg3 just in case you're wondering about my join date status you silly newbies

seldeslim	Posted: Oct 10 2007, 11:24 PM
so good that its banned Group: Members Posts: 4186 Member No.: 2016 Joined: 15-April 06 Status: (0d)	I see you people are looking at the other AB topics right now. -------------------- Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE. also this is gato from new mfgg3 just in case you're wondering about my join date status you silly newbies