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Sprite Competition: Hammer Brothers!, And Boomerang, Fire etc Brothers
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| QUOTE (Toni @ Oct 29 2004, 08:38 PM) | | QUOTE (Slam The Chao @ Oct 30 2004, 12:27 AM) | | QUOTE (Mario Gamer @ Oct 28 2004, 06:01 PM) | | QUOTE (Slam The Chao @ Oct 28 2004, 04:58 PM) | | Blah. |
Blah indeed.
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Thanks for that imposibly helpful criticism.
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I'll thry to be a bit more helpful. Let's see...  Okay, the arms should be moved a tad higher. As it is, they look as if they come out of his stomach. Your sprite shows the hammerbro up front, but his feet are standing sideways. Add some toes/claws there. The head seems to be too wide. Make it a little bit thinner, or add the ear pieces of the helmet (whatever they are called). The rest looks okay, and the coloring is pretty good.  The pose is a little stiff, but all in all not too shabby. |
YES. This is the kind of critique I look forward to when I show something publicly.
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