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  Posted: Nov 14 2007, 09:37 PM
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Me and my brother worked hard and WASN'T easy! We were surprised that I made it. (really surprised...) laugh.gif Hope you like it!

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Posted: Nov 14 2007, 09:40 PM
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Whoa all the empty space owies

But this is pretty good... nice first submission. Better organization would be nice, though.


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Posted: Nov 14 2007, 09:43 PM
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QUOTE (Zero Kirby @ Nov 14 2007, 09:40 PM)
Whoa all the empty space owies

But this is pretty good... nice first submission. Better organization would be nice, though.

Sorry for the empty space... I didn't know what to do with it... ohmy.gif
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Posted: Nov 14 2007, 09:47 PM
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Icon needs to be 100x100


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Posted: Nov 14 2007, 09:53 PM
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Well, I really like the effort.

Right now, though, the sprites are only decent. The outlines are jagged, the shading is weird... And so on.

I hope you don't take this as an insult. My first sheets were way worse.

Right now, these aren't too good. But I think you could be good someday.


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Posted: Nov 14 2007, 10:02 PM
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I still wonder how the other Count Blecks got in there...

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Posted: Nov 15 2007, 02:43 PM
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They are very good for a bigginer, but organize it a little.


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Posted: Nov 15 2007, 03:17 PM
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Hay! Glad to see you can post! Good sprites to.


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Posted: Nov 16 2007, 09:57 PM
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Colour the empty space white and yes the rips are good!


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Posted: Nov 16 2007, 10:05 PM
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Very good, just a few things I'd like to point out...

~ His mask seems a bit short on the lighter side, vertically I mean. Maybe add a bit to the bottom of the light part? Otherwise it seems lopsided with the dark side.

~ Some of the lines on his coat look a little too thick, but it's nothing a little touch-up won't fix.

~ Some of the sheet is redundant, most noticeably the attacking poses. It would be sufficient to have the magic ball animation, then have his "finger up in the air" poses separate, otherwise it takes up much unneeded room.

~ The blue is a little harsh on the eyes. Maybe change it to something like dark cyan.

~ The large text bubbles in the credit cartoon are, well, large, and rather unncecessary. Either remove them, or use smaller text bubbles.


Othewise, great job. Fix those things, and it should get accepted no problem.


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Posted: Nov 17 2007, 12:40 AM
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It looks nice, but the dark blue background looks rather terrible, I suggest making it transparent.,


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I like the colors, including the outfit, except I would add more shade to the star attacks.

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