Grazin' in the Grass

Er, well not exactly. But this is one of those pics that makes me feel like going and messing around outside. Can you dig it?

C+C

HOLY **** ENORMOUS HEAD AND TINY ARMS


is that normal?!

Er, if you're counting the back part of his head, that's mostly hair.

his eyes are nearly as big as his hands

Arms look small as daggers, might want to fix that. Hands are pretty small too.

Not too sure about the head untill arms and hands are fixed.

I'll consider it.

However, the changes you guys are suggesting would involve going back to the original sketch and starting over from there and redoing the entire thing. And I really don't feel like it, no offense.

Also, as a forewarning, don't take this as me shooting down your criticism, because I'm not. I'm just putting that out there before someone pouts and starts riding me for something everyone on this board seems to do.

Oh yeah, I'm not saying you gotta go back and redo this drawing


Just something to keep in mind for future drawings!


I'm actually not all that good at drawing anatomy myself, but I KNOW that just doesn't look quite right :x

Will do, good sir! *left-handed salute*

But yeah seriously, I've looked at it again and the one thing that might force me to go back and do this over is my perfectionist tendencies

We'll see.

This post has been edited by Nicholas Ainsworth on Feb 23 2008, 03:11 AM

The eyes should be together a little more, and not as large. Head size is a bit too much, and the hands do seem kind of small. The uh... shine in the hair seems a little out of place too, but the rest of this is pretty good. Love the coloring!

Pretty much what everyone else said, but the rest looks really awesome. I really like the light effects here

The eyes need to be a little closer to each other.

Everything else looks great!

Yeah.. The proportions are Really REALLY off..

Also lensflare.

Okay guys, I get the proportions thing already. That's being worked on as we speak.

I don't know what the hell is wrong with some of the people in here, but this is amazing. It's almost perfect, actually.

I really feel the same way. This looks professional ever consider a career in art?

Some people actually know how to be constructive

And he ASKED for C+C, which Stands for Comments and Critique, or Constructive Criticism


When someone asks for that, the whole point is to tell them what's wrong so they can improve upon said aspects.

This post has been edited by Ravan on Feb 23 2008, 01:42 PM

You're right Ravan, and I appreciate the constructive criticism. Honestly I do.

However, it's less of criticism and more of beating the artist over the head when everyone continues to point out the same flaw, even after the artist has already said they'll take care of it in the future.

I'm re-inking the image now, and to be perfectly honest, I'm not enjoying it at all.

Way off porportion!

See, this is what I'm talking about.

To all those "out of proportion" people.

be quite. :p I think it PWNS!

The eyes are a bit too far and the hands may be small.

But big whoop. I've seen even more out of proportion artstyles. If this is his art style, than it really doesn't matter does it? :p

Hands and eyes are the only problems i see. Keep up the good work!