Grazin' in the Grass

Here's sum advice:

- The hands are always as big as the character's face (not the entire head).
- If he's a teenager, his length in heads is waay too low. I recommend making him 7 heads tall.

I really like this, keep it up =o

What's already been said has been said so I'll toss in some personal preferences.

The eye on the left... it just looks odd because it's wrapping around his face like that. Also his right hand. Yes I know it's the style but it's bugging me that one hand has the detail and the other doesn't. :x

Again these are just personal preferences.

Have fun never ever improving. :>


Also Nicholas, Sorry about the whole "Beating over the head" thing. I didn't try to repeat it, and believe me, I hate it when it happens to me, too. I can't really control what other people do. XD


Of course, sometimes its a good thing if 1 or 2 people repeat it, because that lets you know it's a really obvious problem that needs to be dealt with. Not always, though.

This post has been edited by Ravan on Feb 23 2008, 05:18 PM

Nah, it's cool. I kinda got the message already when you and Zae said it the first time, and I'm well aware that it's not your fault so it's cool

Sorry if I got a little edgy, it just really irks me when one or two people have pointed out one flaw in my work (which is fine) and then everyone else goes into parrot mode and starts repeating the same thing ad infinitum.

And yeah, I agree with you on that last part.

This post has been edited by Nicholas Ainsworth on Feb 23 2008, 05:25 PM

.. dhfds I just realized I sounded totally cold with my criticism this time though


I usually always state the good points before giving critique and this time I completely FAILED to do that D: