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Posted: Apr 1 2008, 07:24 PM
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Made this last year, thought I should submit it.

Yeah, parts 'n stuff included. Got any ideas for extra poses or anything?

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Posted: Apr 1 2008, 07:49 PM
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That mask looks horribly shaded. Or it just looks really annoying.

That's a nice sheet otherwise.


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Posted: Apr 1 2008, 09:21 PM
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Please shade the mask better.


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Posted: Apr 2 2008, 10:22 AM
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QUOTE (SenovitX @ Apr 2 2008, 04:21 AM)
Please shade the mask better.

No, search for some SPM Wallpaper where you can clearly see Mario (Large) or look at the custom artwork from Peardian. The shading is totally correct, it just needs more contrast. Great job!
Ideas: Some attacks, spear guy, high guy, pyro guy, fly guy, shy ghost, etc. Maybe some special attacks. Also, stop posting unfinished things in the Submit section. Please do that in the arts board.


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Posted: Apr 2 2008, 10:40 AM
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Well, the shading is both correct and incorrect. He has an understanding of how it is shaded, but the shading is too far removed from the outline of the mask and should in fact follow the contour, which at the present it only does partially. All the other pieces are fine.


Speaking of pieces, there isn't really much that can be done with the pieces aside from assemble the pose used as the demonstration, which isn't very useful. Also, the relatively light brown outline on the blue shoes seems a bit strange, especially when contrasted against the very dark red outline of the robe.


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Posted: Apr 2 2008, 08:58 PM
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Fixed the mask a bit, I want this to look right before I start making more poses. Also if anyone could, please move this to the appropriate board.


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