Something is Definitely Up, An A2O comic

http://123james.deviantart.com/art/Somethi...ely-Up-83551059

For those who don't know what A2O is, spend some more time on my DA please.

This post has been edited by 123James on Apr 22 2008, 11:12 PM

Well James, I must say I do love your drawing style. Though I do agree that that comic could use a background. Nothing fancy though, it's just those first two panels have some blank space in it when you compare it to what was put into the last square. Also I just want to point out one personal pet peeve I have with the joke itself and is how random it seems. It seems like you're just expecting us to laugh at something CRAZY coming out at the drop of the hat. I guess I just got tired of that kind of humor after seeing it over a million times on the internet or something.

All and all not bad. Definitely better than some comics I've seen online.

I don't really understand the concept of it, other than the fact that stuff randomly appears and that's why the other guy can't make friends? Though, I do like the three box comic strip going on. It reminds me of Garfield (which is good and bad)

It's good in all sense that you want to keep it really simple as possible, but it's also bad because you've taken away some content that might have helped the reader understand the point better. (or maybe that's just me. TT_TT)

I want to see you possibly ink this? and pick out word bubbles and font to go along with this to make it more professional looking. (I'm not saying you HAVE to do that, but it'd be nice to see it like that. lol)

Over all good jerbs. :3

That's pretty much the of the whole joke of that comic. Basically what I planned is that a bunch of odd stuff happens to Niles in the form of some sci-fi series and Brandon only gets to see some of it (think of it like being in the shoes of one of the innocent bystanders in a show like that who only gets like five seconds on screen and no lines). The comic that's next on my "to touch up and post" list involves Brandon investigating what's exactly what's up with the kid. Said comic will be the last Niles one for a while though.

I would if had/knew how to use any programs like that. Lately I've just been waiting for those kinds of things to just fall out of the sky. I know that's not likely going to happen but I'm just lazy about that I guess...

This post has been edited by 123James on Apr 22 2008, 11:06 PM

Needs color. Shading. bolder lines.