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Posted: May 15 2008, 01:54 PM
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Thanks to Them

In this urban wonderland
This concrete, plastic metropolis
There are myths of wonderful creatures
That they called animals
Thanks to them

There are still a few left
The myths are not fiction
Somehow, the human race survived
Without nature
Thanks to them

With artificially synthesized food
Humans managed to live
And the creation of oxygen factories
Kept us from suffocating
Thanks to them

There are no plants left
At least, none that emit oxygen
They were mutated by our radiation
And pollution of the dirt
Thanks to them

Sadly, even those plants are few
They were able to live off synthetic chemicals
Not sunlight
There is no sunlight
Thanks to them

The sun died off around 2500
The Earth survived off of solar power back then
The air was clean
There was peace
Thanks to them

But a country, now abolished
Fired toxins into space because they had no room
Those 40,000 drums of irradiated glycerin
Destroyed the sun
Thanks to them

Now the world is coming to apocalypse
No one can help it
They were not smart enough to avoid it
Now it is all over
Thanks to them

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  Posted: May 15 2008, 01:56 PM
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aaaiiiiiieeeee!!!!
scary!!!
im gonna go hide in that goombas shoe


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Posted: May 15 2008, 05:51 PM
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Yay for pessimism!


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Posted: May 16 2008, 01:20 AM
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QUOTE (NICKtendo DS @ May 16 2008, 12:51 AM)
Yay for pessimism!

YAY!


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Posted: May 16 2008, 04:05 AM
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Hmm, good poem. Was it part of the assignment that it was about the end of the world?


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Posted: May 16 2008, 07:54 AM
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Old. But why not update?
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Does the story of how you thought of this poem include the phrase "and then I started drinking vodka" ?
jk budday.

Yeah it seems pretty good...and dark...and gives me a sense of loneliness...*leaves topic*


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Posted: May 16 2008, 09:23 PM
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Nice poem. I liked it.


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