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Flamedragon	Posted: Jul 5 2008, 05:20 PM
Xion is greater than Aqua Group: Members Posts: 1339 Member No.: 4904 Joined: 19-February 08 Status: (0d)	Its just a sketch, I did. I really don't know what it is. =d Updated - July 13, 2008 Updated - July 15, 2008 Updated - July 20, 2008 Updated - July 21, 2008 This post has been edited by Flamedragon on Jul 21 2008, 03:00 AM --------------------

Dex	Posted: Jul 5 2008, 05:35 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	Did you basically just scribble lines? -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

Flamedragon

Posted: Jul 5 2008, 05:47 PM

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QUOTE (Dex @ Jul 5 2008, 05:35 PM)

Did you basically just scribble lines?

Ya, its just a sketch, not the real thing at all.
Just wanted to know what you guys think of it.

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Funky	Posted: Jul 6 2008, 09:30 AM
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	Posted: Jul 6 2008, 05:44 PM
Group: Posts: Member No.: Joined: -- Status: (0d)	The ground in it looks cool even though it's just scribbling. But the guy trapped in the swamp (I think that's what he is, at least) is not so great. I'd almost recommend to remove him completely. For some reason it reminds me more of a sewer, too...

Flamedragon	Posted: Jul 13 2008, 07:05 AM
Xion is greater than Aqua Group: Members Posts: 1339 Member No.: 4904 Joined: 19-February 08 Status: (0d)	Well I am going to fully re-edit the dude, and thxs for the advice and help ^^". --------------------

Flamedragon	Posted: Jul 15 2008, 11:31 PM
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Dex	Posted: Jul 15 2008, 11:55 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	It's REALLY hard to differentiate the tiles from the background. I suggest upping the contrast on the tiles and changing their colors around a bit. -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

Boomb	Posted: Jul 16 2008, 06:09 AM
Exploding awesomeness! Group: Members Posts: 723 Member No.: 4724 Joined: 16-November 07 Status: (0d)	These are pretty cool, just fix the background and you could make an nice game with these. -------------------- Referece Drawn by: LocoRoo Tick-Tick The Superhero iceinwar Darkyoshi(1) Darkyoshi(Egg) Darkyoshi(2) crazy70 thingy JetSetRamazuki

Ragnarök	Posted: Jul 16 2008, 12:29 PM
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Posted: Jul 17 2008, 02:44 AM

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QUOTE (Ragnarök @ Jul 17 2008, 03:59 AM)

Way to messy.

...Swamps are like that.
Anyways, even though they are scribbled they still look quite good.

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Posted: Jul 17 2008, 06:06 AM

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QUOTE (Flamedragon @ Jul 16 2008, 06:31 AM)

Awesome tileset man!

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Flamedragon	Posted: Jul 20 2008, 06:55 PM
Xion is greater than Aqua Group: Members Posts: 1339 Member No.: 4904 Joined: 19-February 08 Status: (0d)	KK thxs for the advice again =D, and thxs for the compliments. --------------------

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Posted: Jul 20 2008, 06:57 PM

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Looks like you could make a nice game out of these! Good job!

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Posted: Jul 20 2008, 07:11 PM

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Flamedragon	Posted: Jul 21 2008, 02:58 AM
Xion is greater than Aqua Group: Members Posts: 1339 Member No.: 4904 Joined: 19-February 08 Status: (0d)	I am thinking of making a game but I suck at making character animations =/ and thanks again for the compliments =3 Idk how I am going to make the main character sprite alive... This post has been edited by Flamedragon on Jul 21 2008, 02:59 AM --------------------

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Posted: Jul 21 2008, 03:08 AM

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QUOTE (Flamedragon @ Jul 21 2008, 04:58 PM)

I am thinking of making a game but I suck at making character animations =/
and thanks again for the compliments =3
Idk how I am going to make the main character sprite alive...
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@Ragnarok: Swamps are suppose to be messy. You want to design the picture as though it were the real thing. Swamps are gross and disgusting and filled with a bunch of weird creepy things (in video games, that's like....zombies and junk). So? Make it gross and disgusting looking! Plains need to look crisp and clean (most of the time.....)

Try out Graphics Gale.
Too lazy to post up a link :P

I like how it actully does feel like a swamp.
I'm guessing you used an airbrush tool? That's what it looks like...

Things you could fix though: On that REALLY light vine thing, you didn't clean up your lines (which makes it look ugly and doesn't look like it fits into the swamp.)

It feels too....camoflaguey. It uses camaflague colors (however it's spelt). I suggest adding a bit of purple (to shower darker portions, lawl) :P

Flamedragon

Posted: Jul 21 2008, 07:49 PM

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QUOTE (Soiyeruda @ Jul 21 2008, 03:08 AM)

Dr. Light - I am thinking of making a game for it.

Knight Nappse - Thanks I think this is my best work so far.

Soiyeruda - Actual I am just using a pencil tool lol.

kk I will fix the Vine and Change the design of it because I want it to look more Swampy/Jungle.

Also explain on the purple more because I don't really don't get it.

But I really want you guys to talk about the Main Character since I want him/her to look perfect.

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