Tailim

Ruh oh a new update to one of my old fakemon. This is my favorite fakemon out of all the fakemon in my fakedex :]



This is Tailim, the Wind Blade pokemon. It is an Ice/Fighting type pokemon. It is a 1st stage pokemon... I love how it turned out.

C+C if you wish.

(3 hours, Photoshop 7.0)

was excepting soul calibur fanart.

but this thing is cute.
=]

is that a third eye on its chest or just a jewel/dot/thing?

Very cute! I love the colours. A few things are bugging me, though. First off, the legs, particularly our right one, seem off. I tried red lining them, but since I'm not exactly sure the anatomy of this character's legs, I can't really effectively pull it off. It appears, however, that right leg should be rotated a tad more to the right and enlarged a smidgen. The "overlap" technique you tried to use there seems off is all. Also, the girth on the tale towards where the little tuft appears shouldn't dissipate completely. There should still be just a tad bit of thickness to that part of the tail, or else the tuft would theoretically hang like a sold object attached by a thread or something. You get what I mean?

Very cute, nonetheless, Ashura! Keep it up!

Tailim is based loosely on Talim, he's said so before




... you've changed the design a lot huh? It looks really cute now

It also reminds me of Tails :>



Also Lady-A's comment on the leg has me notice something -- the leg on the image left varies thickness too much. On the right, that leg looks like a kangaroo leg, so we can imagine it thinning out as it approaches the foot from the knee, but on the left we see the transition is ... far more abrupt. I recommend you edit the thickness there to be more gradient.

Also Lady-A is noting that if the tail terminates before the tuft, it looks like a bell hanging off of the end as opposed to fur surrounding the existing tail.

The left ear looks too thick on the top due to the angle the inner area is drawn in, but you did not thin out the ear itself to accommodate this, so it looks misshapen.

This post has been edited by Draco Icebane on Jul 22 2008, 04:38 AM