Fish n' Chips, With some octopus

Work in work in work in work in work in


PROGRESS

Lookin good so far

Thanks

Whoah that looks awesome. cant wait to see it finished.

I SEE NO OCTOPUS

But you meant a Squid right. Either way, awesome job.!
I see little to no flaws.

He looks like blooper gooper...Is he?

If you'd look at the SYTYCS tourney, you'd know that


-.-

There's no need to get huffy!!!

Really though us Mario ***s should recognize Gooper Blooper >:/



it looks really good, i prefer the left one with the varying outline brightness

Thanks

Also I just don't like dumb comments


*Yeah I'm copying this enemy for SQUIRE check it outttttt !!!*

These sizes are ridiculous -.-

The left arm is too squiggly. But the body is awesome.

The shape of the arms are wonky: the lineart is a little messy. I don't know how to explain it. Try smoothing the legs out a little more.

S'posed to be like that, according to the ref I used.

In my opinion his head could use to fall back a little with the weight. And not stand straight up. Looks a little awkward. Like, angle the cone back.

http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:9pqRB7...per_blooper.jpg
That's actually how it is.

The top of the head is wider in that picture, and the tentacles are thinner, plus your line art is kinda sloppy in certain areas, ESPECIALLY the tentacles, as they bend on one end but not the other, and are very thick.

The head was made that way on purpose, it was how I interpreted it. Anyways, it doesn't really matter now, seeing as how the contest is over. And they DO bend.