OMG I'M DRAWING SOMETHING, Took me long enough

Yeah, it's a sketch I made a couple minutes ago. It's of the main character for a comic I've been planning for over a YEAR. And I'm still not sure how it'll all go down.

I'm going to color it and all that shiz. Recording it for YouTube because I'm in an AIM conversation, and they want me to help out with that kind of thing. And I will, because I owe 'em a lot and I want to.

So yeah, comments and constructive criticism, all that jazz.

Looks pretty cool.
Something about his feet bugs me, though...

Some pointers: the stance is kinda plastic also could use some livin up.
EDIT: correction thing was done pretty fast so it's not all 100% correct it's more like half 30%correct. But heh i'll leave the what's right and wrong stuff to you to figure out.

This post has been edited by HtraM on Aug 3 2008, 10:21 PM

I don't understand a single line of that thing, to be honest.

I have a weird style. It's not supposed to be an action-y pose, this is a planning sketch. This is meant to establish a basic sense of the character.

I'll make cooler poses when I get him finished.

But really you don't bother to make an ounce of sense with that "correction" of yours. The face is covered with lines, so it's hard to tell what goes where.

You created three legs (I don't know how you managed to do that honestly), as well.

This is meant to help with anatomy, correct? This is a cartoon. I'm not trying to be realistic with this thing! Some things will be exaggerated! It's natural!

Also don't use imageshack it sucks

EDIT: Ouch, I overreacted. In any case, criticism is usually better when it is typed, not when it takes an image and places lines all over the place. I don't understand it at all.

Sorry for my overreaction, but really, some features are meant to be like the way they are.

This post has been edited by Zero Kirby on Aug 3 2008, 10:52 PM