King Dedede with his hammer

[Mr.Marth]

a doodle i'm working on with mah tablet.

[Grant]

Seems to me that the hands could use improvement, and also that part of his mouth which seems to go down to the bottom of his lower lip kind of bugs me. Perhaps his feet could look a bit more like they're standing flat on the ground, as well.

The shaping of his hammer could probably be adjusted. I'm guessing you meant the handle to look a bit bent in this case, but the perspective is a bit off in some place(s) (like the top edge), and the head of the hammer doesn't look quite perpendicular to what would be the top of the handle.

Also, he looks a bit... skinny for Dedede, in general. But maybe that's just an intentional stylistic quirk, for all I know.

Otherwise, nice job. I do think the lineart and general cartoony style are interesting.

[Mewizkuit]

I like the colors used on his foot.

[Zero Kirby]

I hate to say this, but your criticism of my sketch can no longer be taken at face value with this little sketch of yours. It's got a lot of weird quirks... like my art.

I now find you hypocritical.

Anyway, that's not to say this is a bad sketch. I rather like it. Just a problem with his right arm, the shoulder seems way off. The hand also seems deformed. His hammer also doesn't look like a hammer, really.