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Mokun

Posted: Aug 4 2008, 09:29 PM

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In case you don't know, the theme for the comp is the DK Crew. I made the one and only DK himself:
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C+C please.

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Shymouse you are like a god or something.

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shymouse

what are you

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his name's not Halo it's the master chief, and i don't know what "doesn't afraid of anything" means, have u ever played halo before?

Dex	Posted: Aug 4 2008, 09:43 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	The face is awful. Sorry, but it looks nothing like DK at all. I suggest lookin up some references...at the moment it looks like you pasted some random face on Donkey Kong. Sorry. -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

Mewizkuit

Posted: Aug 4 2008, 10:56 PM

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The body is nice, but the face is all wrong.

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whenever i feel like clicking "reply"
i stop and think to myself, "why"
will it be a post to be remembered by?
or will i scare off a n00b and tell him to die?

Human Ref Fursona
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Best Fangame Ever

Mokun

Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:10 PM

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Is this any better?

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Shymouse you are like a god or something.

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shymouse

what are you

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his name's not Halo it's the master chief, and i don't know what "doesn't afraid of anything" means, have u ever played halo before?

Glukom	Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:13 PM
OFF TO JOIN THE NAVY Group: Members Posts: 4071 Member No.: 2455 Joined: 6-August 06 Status: (0d)	It looks more like DK now, but the angle is all off. Try to make the face more like that, facing the same direction as the body. -------------------- EVERYBODY WHO READS THIS AND DISLIKES THE DIRECTION OF NEW MFGG i feel your pain :[

Mokun

Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:29 PM

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Okay, I made took Glukom's advice and changed the angles. Now they can be used as a turning animation!

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My refs - Me Me Demonlemon Ashura Riley Bungalow Tragedy Anne Robbydude
Deviantart Pixeljoint Newgrounds

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Shymouse you are like a god or something.

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shymouse

what are you

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his name's not Halo it's the master chief, and i don't know what "doesn't afraid of anything" means, have u ever played halo before?

Demonlemon	Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:36 PM
MY CHILDREN COMETH Group: Members Posts: 5647 Member No.: 3281 Joined: 9-February 07 Status: (0d)	Looks great with the new face -------------------- If life gives you lemons... RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!! TCOTL Reference Humanoid reference Drawings/sprites people have made me.

Mokun

Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:43 PM

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Thanks!
Anyway, I finished some cheap animations! :3

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My refs - Me Me Demonlemon Ashura Riley Bungalow Tragedy Anne Robbydude
Deviantart Pixeljoint Newgrounds

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Shymouse you are like a god or something.

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shymouse

what are you

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his name's not Halo it's the master chief, and i don't know what "doesn't afraid of anything" means, have u ever played halo before?

KGladiator	Posted: Aug 7 2008, 10:48 PM
Pixelartist Apprentice Group: Members Posts: 131 Member No.: 5375 Joined: 3-June 08 Status: (0d)	I think you've still got some work to do, but it's coming along quite nicely. The edited face looks a lot better than the start. I'd say add some more detailed texture to the hair and then detail his feet and hands some. You know, like adding knuckles and lines that represent the spaces between fingers. -------------------- Pixelartist Apprentice~Being tutored by my bud, Dex Advisor to Dex 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed. If you are one of the 10% that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your signature

Dex

Posted: Aug 7 2008, 10:51 PM

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QUOTE (KGladiator @ Aug 7 2008, 10:48 PM)

I think you've still got some work to do, but it's coming along quite nicely. The edited face looks a lot better than the start. I'd say add some more detailed texture to the hair and then detail his feet and hands some. You know, like adding knuckles and lines that represent the spaces between fingers.

I'll agree with good ole' Gladiator here. Some texturing on the fur would help the piece, and a bit more detail could really be added. The face lacks the highlights the old one has, as well, so I'd suggest adding the lightest color there too, bud. Nice work, keep practicing!

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