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Noko Bombette WIP, SYTYCS Round 2 entry

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Pip	Posted: Aug 5 2008, 04:15 PM
you are now reading my posts in chris tucker's voice Group: Members Posts: 5151 Member No.: 2941 Joined: 13-November 06 Status: (0d)	May make further poses; used all nine of those colors. By the way, a Noko Bombette is a Buzzy Beetle that explodes; hence the "key" on the back. -------------------- **** are p. cool

Shawn	Posted: Aug 5 2008, 06:19 PM
humans in the netherworld?! Group: Members Posts: 3040 Member No.: 1874 Joined: 11-February 06 Status: (0d)	You're not using the colours very effectively. It just looks like you're using the colours because you have to, rather than put it to the full potential. -------------------- DeviantArt - Ref

Mr.Marth

Posted: Aug 6 2008, 01:13 PM

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What shawn said, those colors have alot of potentinal

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(LuigiFan @ Nov 25 2006, 02:20 PM)
you're like some crazy toy with a pull string that has 18000 random phrases that's on a mad out of control rampage all over the city

Shawn	Posted: Aug 6 2008, 05:06 PM
humans in the netherworld?! Group: Members Posts: 3040 Member No.: 1874 Joined: 11-February 06 Status: (0d)	Hate spriting like this, it's sickening. Anyway, just a minor edit to show you how to use the colours more effectively. Hope you don't mind. :X -------------------- DeviantArt - Ref

KGladiator	Posted: Aug 7 2008, 10:58 PM
Pixelartist Apprentice Group: Members Posts: 131 Member No.: 5375 Joined: 3-June 08 Status: (0d)	I agree with Shawn... the colors also don't stick out very much on the shell, or really anywhere besides the single light blue shade. It looks like the whole thing is made with just a few colors. On a brighter note, the shape is actually really good. If you're going to stick to those colors, I'd make the middle blue shade lighter, both browns darker, and the dark green darker. I'm not sure how you want it to look so you change it however you want =] -------------------- Pixelartist Apprentice~Being tutored by my bud, Dex Advisor to Dex 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed. If you are one of the 10% that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your signature

Dex	Posted: Aug 7 2008, 11:01 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	Because I'm aiming to overshadow Kglad in every post he posts in... I'll agree with him AND Shawn. You barely used any shading or color combinations. The shell has barely any shading and the rim has none whatsoever. I really think you should try to blend the colors you've been given and make them work together...right now, it's really bland. ~Dex -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

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