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CeeY	Posted: Aug 8 2008, 09:52 PM
Regular Group: Members Posts: 240 Member No.: 5569 Joined: 25-July 08 Status: (0d)	Ok here my sheets, C+C please! Man I need a Cool Sig like SGG! jealous lol, I have 4 sheets that im currently working on, but right now Im mostly focusing on Sumo Bro, and here are the sheets: Flurry Ghost Piranha Sumo Bro Animations Idle Walking Stomping This post has been edited by CoolYoshi on Aug 20 2008, 09:14 PM -------------------- Blog

Demonlemon	Posted: Aug 8 2008, 09:54 PM
MY CHILDREN COMETH Group: Members Posts: 5647 Member No.: 3281 Joined: 9-February 07 Status: (0d)	The x-naughts and the ghost piranha look great, sumo bro needs some work. -------------------- If life gives you lemons... RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!! TCOTL Reference Humanoid reference Drawings/sprites people have made me.

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QUOTE (Demonlemon @ Aug 8 2008, 09:54 PM)

The x-naughts and the ghost piranha look great, sumo bro needs some work.

Well he does looks like he needs to, I mean I have all the shading, lineart, and colors right, but if it is about the mouth, it is supposed to be wide.

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Dex	Posted: Aug 8 2008, 09:59 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	CoolYoshi On MFGG too? :] Welcome, they look nice, except for the Sumo Bro. I suggest you work on the animations a bit. Also, this belongs in the WIP forum. This post has been edited by Dex on Aug 8 2008, 10:00 PM -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

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QUOTE (Dex @ Aug 8 2008, 09:59 PM)

CoolYoshi

On MFGG too? :]

Welcome, they look nice, except for the Sumo Bro. I suggest you work on the animations a bit.

Also, this belongs in the WIP forum.

Thanks Dex, and I'll fix the best I can.

XD Man sorry don't know the routine around here, WIP forum sounds great, I mean Boomansion, TSR, and what now is a dump- Pixeltendo didn't have that. Maybe SGG can move it, but for now leave it here and C+C i'll contact him :]
WOW WIP forum, looks like MFGG is a bit more organized.

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Posted: Aug 8 2008, 10:22 PM

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QUOTE (Dex @ Aug 8 2008, 07:59 PM)

I suggest you work on the animations a bit.

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Posted: Aug 8 2008, 10:25 PM

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There pretty good. There's something very off about the sumo bro though, I just can't put my finger on it. The X-naut looks a flat for some reason, maybe the aaing. I don't really like the aaing on flurry either. Ghost piranha is awesome though, good job!

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CeeY	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 08:46 PM
Regular Group: Members Posts: 240 Member No.: 5569 Joined: 25-July 08 Status: (0d)	Woo big bump, im still working my other WIP's and Im deciding to just dump my X-Nauts because I made those a while ago and they aren't that good, so SGG will be finishing his, annyway I started another M&L WIP, this time some misc sea enemies from SMB3, -------------------- Blog

Dex	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 09:06 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	Why do the tentacles disappear? If you were going for that "thrust" effect that jellyfish do, I'd suggest actually making the tentacles curl up rather than just cutting the bottom off. -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

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QUOTE (Dex @ Aug 20 2008, 09:06 PM)

Why do the tentacles disappear? If you were going for that "thrust" effect that jellyfish do, I'd suggest actually making the tentacles curl up rather than just cutting the bottom off.

Great idea Dex, Miles07 told me that on TSR, I will do that, I just wanted to get it posted first. Also I dumped my X-Nauts they are old and flat, leave X-Nauts to SGG.

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