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Zero Kirby	Posted: Aug 10 2008, 04:31 PM
Well, your local psychic is off to visit your mother! Group: Members Posts: 6252 Member No.: 2501 Joined: 15-August 06 Status: (0d)	I got a new art set and sketch books so I made this! It's the first time I've ever used a kneaded eraser and three different pencils! ... This is, unfortunately, the crowning achievement of my art life. COMMENTS AND CRITICISM PLEASE AND THANK YOUSE -------------------- Falcon Punch is the result of the Sun heating fists. It drives the Blue Falcon. Heating causes destruction of water into the pain, where it then hurts, creating rain. Rain creates flowing water in tears, which can then be converted into other forms through more pain. My Ref - Full Body Ref (minus the badass hat) Visit Just Another Just Another Day - The Webcomic! Super Mario Zero: Game Status (RAZZ Y U STEALING MAH FORMAT BRO) Mario Object: Pretty much finished! Enemy Objects: [\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|--] Just gonna add Spinies, Bullet Bills and Cheep Cheeps! Boss Fights: None in progress. General Engine: [\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|-] Ranking System Complete! Gonna add pipes! Levels Complete: [\|---------] Haven't even finished the tutorial!

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Posted: Aug 10 2008, 04:33 PM

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Looks pretty good! The eyes make him seem sort-of comical/anime.

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SkullKidsStory	Posted: Aug 10 2008, 04:33 PM
blink blink Group: Members Posts: 115 Member No.: 5072 Joined: 17-March 08 Status: (0d)	thats really cool! i like the cartoony style XD --------------------

Mr.Marth

Posted: Aug 10 2008, 05:24 PM

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The eyes are to simple, your use of pencil switching is to dynamic. It looks like you used and H pencil then went into a HB and then did a 6B that's pretty diverse. Should be HB to sketch, 1 or 2B to do primary shading and the secondary shade should be 4b(i don't like 3b's sue me)

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you're like some crazy toy with a pull string that has 18000 random phrases that's on a mad out of control rampage all over the city

Zero Kirby

Posted: Aug 10 2008, 05:28 PM

Well, your local psychic is off to visit your mother!
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QUOTE (HtraM @ Aug 10 2008, 03:24 PM)

I used a black layout pencil for a starting sketch, used a 4B for the outlines, an HB for the light shading, and a 2B for the darker shading.

Also I really don't care if the eyes are too simple, I'm not trying to create "SUPER EXTREME ACTION ADVENTURE WITH PLENTY OF BLOOD AND EXPLOSIONS XXIVASDF" this is just a simple sketch of a simple (-minded) man.

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Falcon Punch is the result of the Sun heating fists. It drives the Blue Falcon. Heating causes destruction of water into the pain, where it then hurts, creating rain. Rain creates flowing water in tears, which can then be converted into other forms through more pain.

My Ref - Full Body Ref (minus the badass hat)

Visit Just Another Just Another Day - The Webcomic!

Super Mario Zero: Game Status (RAZZ Y U STEALING MAH FORMAT BRO)
Mario Object: Pretty much finished!
Enemy Objects: [||||||||--] Just gonna add Spinies, Bullet Bills and Cheep Cheeps!
Boss Fights: None in progress.
General Engine: [|||||||||-] Ranking System Complete! Gonna add pipes!
Levels Complete: [|---------] Haven't even finished the tutorial!

Dex	Posted: Aug 10 2008, 06:54 PM
woah what?! Group: Members Posts: 4171 Member No.: 2634 Joined: 6-September 06 Status: (0d)	Don't mind Marth, this looks great. :] COLOR IT -------------------- ---> ?!?! <--- /Wiki/PJ Gallery/DA/SA/Refs/ btw DavidCaruso was here

Mr.Marth

Posted: Aug 10 2008, 07:11 PM

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QUOTE (Dex @ Aug 10 2008, 06:54 PM)

Don't mind Marth, this looks great. :]

I'm gonna go slit my wrists and cry myself to sleep! haha. :[

Not saying it's bad i really really like it. The only thing I don't like is the eyes, and yes COLOR IT!

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you're like some crazy toy with a pull string that has 18000 random phrases that's on a mad out of control rampage all over the city

KGladiator	Posted: Aug 11 2008, 08:23 PM
Pixelartist Apprentice Group: Members Posts: 131 Member No.: 5375 Joined: 3-June 08 Status: (0d)	Yeah what you need to do with the eyes is pretty self-explanitory... But it looks really cool nice job =] coloring=pretty =] -------------------- Pixelartist Apprentice~Being tutored by my bud, Dex Advisor to Dex 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed. If you are one of the 10% that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your signature

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