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Decent enough. Looks more YI style. Let me be the first to say: Yes, you pillowed them. The best way to at least make them not pillowed it to put the light source towards the top middle of the thwomp/thwimp.
You used 5 shades of almost any given color. 3 would've worked also. Post information, such as who to credit and junk. Really helpful if you actually want credit. The randomly assorted white dots on the thwomp look really bad because they stick out.
Like I said, decent enough, but it could've been shaded better, AND use less colors.
Sorry if I talk too much, but I'm a hard critic. Nothing makes me happy except cute things and slightly above decent things.
EDIT: Technically, you ARE submitting to the main site. If you wanted opinions, this should've went into the art board.
This post has been edited by Soiyeruda on Aug 14 2008, 08:25 AM
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