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> Leifur., for a game or a comic or something idkay
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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 05:42 PM
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the colors scanned a bit light!



Anyway, this little guy is called Leifur, and his shadow does not have a name yet. These are two of the main characters for a possible game or webcomic of sorts that I wanna make. There's not much for plot yet, but hopefully there will be more soon. :]

Whatcha think? Also, if anyone has any ideas for a name for the shadow, those are welcome. Simpler is better! (The shadow's name is Einar, thanks to Shroomguy!)


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 05:45 PM
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Awesome as usal, but the arms look a little long IMO. I remeber playing a demo of a game where the main character's shadow could attack. Awesome game, but I can't find it. Anyways great work.


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Like I said before it's incredible.
But you've added Leifur's shadow now.

We need to find another Iceland-ish name for it.


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 06:34 PM
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Cute! Good job.


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 06:37 PM
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The shading you did with the pencil (?) looks amazing... O_____O


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 06:49 PM
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Hey, thanks guys!!! :]

@Shroomguy: was it Okage: Shadow king?


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 06:52 PM
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I think so. Was the shadow in that game flat?


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 06:55 PM
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yeah!!

I love that game.


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 07:19 PM
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Any ideas of where I could find it? biggrin.gif


Hmmm....this guys from Iceland eh? The shadow shall be....Einar....meaning great warrior.


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QUOTE (shroomguy @ Aug 12 2008, 07:19 PM)
Any ideas of where I could find it? biggrin.gif


Hmmm....this guys from Iceland eh? The shadow shall be....Einar....meaning great warrior.

Well, you could prolly order it somewhere on the internet. It's pretty old now, so I'm really not sure if it would still be around at any stores.


Einar is an awesome name! I think I will use that for the shadow!! Thanks! haha.


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 07:39 PM
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Like I said on AIM, this is awesome.

Also like I said on AIM-user posted image


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Lookin' good biggrin.gif
Can't really say anything's wrong with it.


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QUOTE (Shyguy Grey @ Aug 12 2008, 07:39 PM)
Like I said on AIM, this is awesome.

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This is amazing!!!!

Thanks, dude!!! :]


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Posted: Aug 12 2008, 08:03 PM
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Nice and cute, and the lightness of it makes it all the more appealing.

Also, if you want name suggestions, a japanese sounding one would be Kage-chan (stereotypical yes, but fitting), or if you want something cute and simple, Shadee (pronounced Shad-'e').

EDIT: Didn't see above comment, sorry.

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Amazing coloring job, and the lineart isn't bad either!

I also misread the title as my name for a second.


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I looove the colouring. <: The shadow design is great too.
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Very cute, and good colouring, but the body proportions are distinctly off. I'd redline for you, but at the moment all my CG supplies (e.g. tablet) are in boxes for college. Let me see if I can talk y'through it.

Considering where his waist (the thinnest part of his abdomen) appears to be, the elbow (middle of the arm) seems to be misplaced. The waist and the elbow are usually more or less on the same level, and here his arms seem to be abnormally long. Also, teh legs seem short in comparison to the body and the (lengthy) arms. All and all, there's just something off about the whole lower body. Oh, and his left leg (our right) seems a little tweaked, I dunno.

That aside, I really like the style. It's really cute, and good job at sticking that hand in (even though it's only a little bit). Keep practicing hands; maybe next time we can see even a little bit more of them, yeah?
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Posted: Aug 13 2008, 11:06 AM
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Thanks! I really wasn't going for correct body proportions, though. It's just supposed to be sort of a cute, silly style, and I actually have some other sketches of him with hands! bahaha, I'll have to post those in the sketch forum.


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Posted: Aug 14 2008, 04:16 AM
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Awww,
It looks so cute!
As always Risa, good job!


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