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Leifur., for a game or a comic or something idkay
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Very cute, and good colouring, but the body proportions are distinctly off. I'd redline for you, but at the moment all my CG supplies (e.g. tablet) are in boxes for college. Let me see if I can talk y'through it.
Considering where his waist (the thinnest part of his abdomen) appears to be, the elbow (middle of the arm) seems to be misplaced. The waist and the elbow are usually more or less on the same level, and here his arms seem to be abnormally long. Also, teh legs seem short in comparison to the body and the (lengthy) arms. All and all, there's just something off about the whole lower body. Oh, and his left leg (our right) seems a little tweaked, I dunno.
That aside, I really like the style. It's really cute, and good job at sticking that hand in (even though it's only a little bit). Keep practicing hands; maybe next time we can see even a little bit more of them, yeah?
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