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One of my favorite drawings, Drawing of soccer player

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El Sacrificio	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:31 PM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 82 Member No.: 1471 Joined: 23-September 05 Status: (0d)	Alright, so being the huge soccer (football- to others) fan that I am, I decided to draw Jared Borgetti, a famous Mexican soccer player. What came to be is my favorite drawing and perhaps my best drawing ever. Respectful criticisms are welcome. Just something I did on my spare time to get away. I had a lot of spare time. This drawing took me clost to three hours, I believe, maybe even a little more. Oh yeah, sorry about the quality. At the moment I don't have a working scanner. So the above is a picture of my sketchbook propped up against my chimney on top of a very old stereo.

SkullKidsStory	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:33 PM
blink blink Group: Members Posts: 115 Member No.: 5072 Joined: 17-March 08 Status: (0d)	wow thats preety good! but i dunno sumthing looks wrong... --------------------

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Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:38 PM

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QUOTE (SkullKidsStory @ Aug 13 2008, 08:33 PM)

wow thats preety good! but i dunno sumthing looks wrong...

what would that be?

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Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:43 PM

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QUOTE (El Sacrificio @ Aug 13 2008, 09:38 PM)

what would that be?

i dunno.. maby the shading?

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Jlhgomez	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:46 PM
Good Night MFGG 2.0 Group: Members Posts: 1010 Member No.: 4850 Joined: 19-December 07 Status: (0d)	WOW O_O It's very good :33 The shading yeah it's a little wrong, but you did the clothes and anathomy so right. I like it! -------------------- Click here if you like Megaman Luishi (Main character) Necro Jlhgomez Some furry team stuff ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People who has drawn me: Jazz Yak (Jlhgomez) Razor SupaStixDude Gato YoshiFan GM Joe Inky (Boo, Secret Santa)

Nystre	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:56 PM
america is okay i guess sometimes Group: Members Posts: 6806 Member No.: 3012 Joined: 4-December 06 Status: (0d)	Ahhh, fantastic work, but there's just a few quirks here and there! For one, the clothing folds seem a bit.. overdone. I understand trying to go for detail, but.. it looks like you put a bit TOO much into the folds, and it looks a tad.. unrealistic. This line.. in particular, doesn't quite make sense It's not bad, other than that. At first glance, his shoulders looked odd, but I think maybe it's just his shirt! Oh right, and I absolutely love the hands and face. I must say, fantastic work on those! This post has been edited by Promenade on Aug 13 2008, 09:58 PM -------------------- 　^　^ (˚o˚　 )) う~ ugh i want to go to bed because i browse with sigs disabled i cannot even remember what is in mine half the time 　^　 ^ ((　ﾟ д ﾟ ) --- NO. YOU HAVE AN ASSIGNMENT DUE TOMORROW. 　　つ　つ

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Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:58 PM

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QUOTE (Promenade @ Aug 13 2008, 09:56 PM)

Ahhh, fantastic work, but there's just a few quirks here and there!

For one, the clothing folds seem a bit.. overdone. I understand trying to go for detail, but.. it looks like you put a bit TOO much into the folds, and it looks a tad.. unrealistic.

This line.. in particular, doesn't quite make sense

It's not bad, other than that. At first glance, his shoulders looked odd, but I think maybe it's just his shirt!

that must be it (and the shading) but STILL its an awsome drawing

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Nystre	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 09:59 PM
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Posted: Aug 13 2008, 10:06 PM

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QUOTE (Promenade @ Aug 13 2008, 09:59 PM)

Shading.. ? it looks fine..

maby ur right!

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ZeldaMalon	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 10:19 PM
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SolarSexy	Posted: Aug 13 2008, 11:04 PM
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Simoneister	Posted: Aug 14 2008, 07:15 AM
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El Sacrificio	Posted: Aug 14 2008, 05:40 PM
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Hausuke	Posted: Aug 14 2008, 05:45 PM
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