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> Baby Shy Guy!, Even as a baby he wore a mask!
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Posted: Aug 19 2008, 10:42 PM
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Here it is, my baby shy guy!
Should I submit it?

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:39 AM
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No, you shouldn't. No offense, but this isn't even half as good as any of the other ones. Its terribly skewed and stretched, and the shading is terrible, if there even is any. On some of them, they are symmetrical, and on others, the animation is just made by selecting part of the sprite and moving it a few pixels. When you fix all of these, it might be submitable.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:39 AM
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It's a good sheet; go ahead and submit it, if you ask me.

On second thought, you should fix his eyes before you submit it.

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:40 AM
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Its very cute, but it lacks the quality of your other sheets.

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:34 AM
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QUOTE (Dr. Light @ Aug 20 2008, 03:40 PM)
Its very cute, but it lacks the quality of your other sheets.

My other sheets?
Remind me please.
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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:37 AM
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they think you´re Gameboy
so yea he´s not Gameboy you know wink.gif

Yea fix the issues the others mentioned, also the back sprite´s + door sprite´s sizes don´t fit together.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:48 AM
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UPDATE:
Okay I fixed a few things of his head and back sprites


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:08 AM
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Too blocky.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:10 AM
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QUOTE (PSI Guy @ Aug 20 2008, 06:08 PM)
Too blocky.

I tried to fix that problem,
can some one help me?
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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:25 AM
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Try to fix up the shading a bit, other then that I like it...
(Just needs some work.)


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 06:34 AM
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No
nonono
Round the mask at the bottom, and work on the...umm...bit of fabric above the mask string, idk what else to call it.
Make it actually cry, what you have in the bubble is lazyness


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Posted: Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM
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Okay, I've really edited this guy now,
I hope it's a bit better, still WIP,
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Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods?

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Posted: Aug 22 2008, 03:36 PM
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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM)
Okay, I've really edited this guy now,
I hope it's a bit better, still WIP,
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Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods?

ugh
well, the sprite is good, but looks nothing like a baby.
Would you mind if I gave you a single sprite, and you can base your sheet around it?


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Posted: Aug 22 2008, 03:37 PM
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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM)
Okay, I've really edited this guy now,
I hope it's a bit better, still WIP,
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Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods?

Decent sprite, not a baby, at all though. Way to big to be a baby.


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Posted: Aug 22 2008, 08:23 PM
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QUOTE (Gameboy @ Aug 23 2008, 06:36 AM)
ugh
well, the sprite is good, but looks nothing like a baby.
Would you mind if I gave you a single sprite, and you can base your sheet around it?

I don't mind, It'll be a big help though, thanks!
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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:05 AM
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Okay, I made a huge edit now,
I edited Baby Mario to make my Baby Shy Guy and I got to say it is MUCH better now!:
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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:13 AM
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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 24 2008, 05:05 AM)
Okay, I made a huge edit now,
I edited Baby Mario to make my Baby Shy Guy and I got to say it is MUCH better now!:
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I'm sorry, but it's not. A shyguys mask isn't that big in proportion to it's hood and body. I'd suggest making everything from scratch except the mask because shyguys are pretty hard to edit from other YIDS babies(Sorry if that sounded harsh).

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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:20 AM
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QUOTE (Frogjester @ Aug 24 2008, 08:13 PM)
I'm sorry, but it's not. A shyguys mask isn't that big in proportion to it's hood and body. I'd suggest making everything from scratch except the mask because shyguys are pretty hard to edit from other YIDS babies(Sorry if that sounded harsh).

Not a problem, the reason why it's big it's cause I wanted to make it babyish,
oh well, I'll fix the hood!
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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:29 AM
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Fixed:
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Posted: Aug 26 2008, 01:40 AM
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Hello?
Any comments on the fixed shy guy?
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