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Baby Shy Guy!, Even as a baby he wore a mask!

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Yak	Posted: Aug 19 2008, 10:42 PM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Here it is, my baby shy guy! Should I submit it? EDIT This post has been edited by Yak on Aug 20 2008, 02:47 AM

Ndsfreak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:39 AM
Who wants a body massage? Group: Members Posts: 1993 Member No.: 2868 Joined: 28-October 06 Status: (0d)	No, you shouldn't. No offense, but this isn't even half as good as any of the other ones. Its terribly skewed and stretched, and the shading is terrible, if there even is any. On some of them, they are symmetrical, and on others, the animation is just made by selecting part of the sprite and moving it a few pixels. When you fix all of these, it might be submitable. --------------------

blackcat12	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:39 AM
I see you Group: Members Posts: 678 Member No.: 5144 Joined: 6-April 08 Status: (0d)	It's a good sheet; ~~go ahead and submit it, if you ask me.~~ On second thought, you should fix his eyes before you submit it. This post has been edited by blackcat12 on Aug 20 2008, 12:41 AM -------------------- REF Slightly Obsolete Ref People who drew me: Thingy, Super Paper Toodles, shymouse, Buggo, Nintendan, Meta Koopa, Im4everkool, Twistendo, L.M., Yak, RetroXYZ, Jazz

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:40 AM

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Its very cute, but it lacks the quality of your other sheets.

This post has been edited by Dr. Light on Aug 20 2008, 12:40 AM

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Yak

Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:34 AM

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QUOTE (Dr. Light @ Aug 20 2008, 03:40 PM)

Its very cute, but it lacks the quality of your other sheets.

My other sheets?
Remind me please.

Miaxis	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:37 AM
hagan bromas Group: Members Posts: 1799 Member No.: 2793 Joined: 12-October 06 Status: (0d)	they think you´re Gameboy so yea he´s not Gameboy you know Yea fix the issues the others mentioned, also the back sprite´s + door sprite´s sizes don´t fit together. --------------------

Yak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:48 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	UPDATE: Okay I fixed a few things of his head and back sprites -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

PSI Guy	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:08 AM
I HAVE HAD THIS AVATAR FOR EONS Group: Members Posts: 3040 Member No.: 3208 Joined: 20-January 07 Status: (0d)	Too blocky. -------------------- !

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:10 AM

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QUOTE (PSI Guy @ Aug 20 2008, 06:08 PM)

Too blocky.

I tried to fix that problem,
can some one help me?

tri0nex	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 03:25 AM
Regular Group: Members Posts: 329 Member No.: 5300 Joined: 20-May 08 Status: (0d)	Try to fix up the shading a bit, other then that I like it... (Just needs some work.) -------------------- --------------------

Gameboy	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 06:34 AM
CHUUUUUUU Group: Members Posts: 692 Member No.: 2968 Joined: 20-November 06 Status: (0d)	No nonono Round the mask at the bottom, and work on the...umm...bit of fabric above the mask string, idk what else to call it. Make it actually cry, what you have in the bubble is lazyness --------------------

Yak	Posted: Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Okay, I've really edited this guy now, I hope it's a bit better, still WIP, Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods? This post has been edited by Yak on Aug 21 2008, 06:54 AM

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Posted: Aug 22 2008, 03:36 PM

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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM)

Okay, I've really edited this guy now,
I hope it's a bit better, still WIP,

Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods?

ugh
well, the sprite is good, but looks nothing like a baby.
Would you mind if I gave you a single sprite, and you can base your sheet around it?

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Mr.Marth

Posted: Aug 22 2008, 03:37 PM

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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 06:51 AM)

Okay, I've really edited this guy now,
I hope it's a bit better, still WIP,

Oh and can we move this to the WIP/Sketch Thread please mods?

Decent sprite, not a baby, at all though. Way to big to be a baby.

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Yak

Posted: Aug 22 2008, 08:23 PM

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QUOTE (Gameboy @ Aug 23 2008, 06:36 AM)

ugh
well, the sprite is good, but looks nothing like a baby.
Would you mind if I gave you a single sprite, and you can base your sheet around it?

I don't mind, It'll be a big help though, thanks!

Yak	Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:05 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Okay, I made a huge edit now, I edited Baby Mario to make my Baby Shy Guy and I got to say it is MUCH better now!: -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:13 AM

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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 24 2008, 05:05 AM)

Okay, I made a huge edit now,
I edited Baby Mario to make my Baby Shy Guy and I got to say it is MUCH better now!:

I'm sorry, but it's not. A shyguys mask isn't that big in proportion to it's hood and body. I'd suggest making everything from scratch except the mask because shyguys are pretty hard to edit from other YIDS babies(Sorry if that sounded harsh).

This post has been edited by Frogjester on Aug 24 2008, 05:13 AM

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Yak

Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:20 AM

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QUOTE (Frogjester @ Aug 24 2008, 08:13 PM)

Not a problem, the reason why it's big it's cause I wanted to make it babyish,
oh well, I'll fix the hood!

Yak	Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:29 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Fixed: -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

Yak	Posted: Aug 26 2008, 01:40 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Hello? Any comments on the fixed shy guy? (sorry for triple post ) -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

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