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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:18 AM
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Category: Yoshi's Island DS
Sub-Category: Shy Guy
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Title: Baby Shy Guy
Description: Even Shy Guy has joined the baby invasion!

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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:34 AM
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One eye it's larger than the other... And it's a bit blocky. Other than that, awesome work! ^^


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:36 AM
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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:26 AM
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I agree, its too blockey.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:35 AM
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Oh well, I don't think this will be submitted, but I can't seem to edit it, oh well, lock thread please.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:41 AM
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Just make the mask more circular, and it will be fine.


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:51 AM
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UPDATE:
I fixed a few things on him


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 04:07 AM
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QUOTE (Jlhgomez @ Aug 20 2008, 06:34 AM)
One eye it's larger than the other...

That's normal, except the wrong eye is larger. The eye in the back is supposed to be smaller...


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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 05:53 AM
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It's not just the mask, it's also the body in general. My suggestion for a baby shy guy:

1) Don't give it a mouth. This'll make it appear more childish.
2) Make the cloak cover the shoes.

Now, improvement:
1) The way you do your arms make them appear like regular arms. They don't look like they're covered by a cloak.
2) The spear seems to grow because the Shy Guy's arms don't move.
3) Make the red cloak go one pixel up above the mask.
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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 10:22 PM
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QUOTE (Soiyeruda @ Aug 20 2008, 08:53 PM)
It's not just the mask, it's also the body in general. My suggestion for a baby shy guy:

1) Don't give it a mouth. This'll make it appear more childish.
2) Make the cloak cover the shoes.

Now, improvement:
1) The way you do your arms make them appear like regular arms. They don't look like they're covered by a cloak.
2) The spear seems to grow because the Shy Guy's arms don't move.
3) Make the red cloak go one pixel up above the mask.

Thanks Soy!
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Posted: Aug 20 2008, 10:49 PM
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I swear when I get my hands on him...
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You should just make him poke in one direction, not have a spear out at all times.

And it is indeed very blocky.


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Posted: Aug 21 2008, 12:08 AM
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Because retarded looking women is fun. :S
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There's a YIDS Baby tutorial around the arts board somewhere. You should look at that.

Also, the nickname "Soy" seems really gay on a forum to me. I'm guessing because once it's posted, it stays stuck, unlike in an MMO where it'll stay for like 3 seconds and never be seen again.
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Posted: Aug 21 2008, 02:41 AM
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QUOTE (Soiyeruda @ Aug 21 2008, 03:08 PM)
There's a YIDS Baby tutorial around the arts board somewhere. You should look at that.

Also, the nickname "Soy" seems really gay on a forum to me. I'm guessing because once it's posted, it stays stuck, unlike in an MMO where it'll stay for like 3 seconds and never be seen again.

I can't seem to find it,
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Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:34 AM
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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 03:41 AM)
I can't seem to find it,

...and?
You posted an incomplete sentence. It's very annoying when someone does that,


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Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:35 AM
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Oh, and these need some work done to them. Brush up on your spriting skills and try again!


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