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Baby Shy Guy! (DECLINED)

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Yak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:18 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Submission Type: Sprite Category: Yoshi's Island DS Sub-Category: Shy Guy Type: Original File: Thumbnail: Title: Baby Shy Guy Description: Even Shy Guy has joined the baby invasion! This post has been edited by Yak on Aug 20 2008, 02:50 AM

Jlhgomez	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:34 AM
Good Night MFGG 2.0 Group: Members Posts: 1010 Member No.: 4850 Joined: 19-December 07 Status: (0d)	One eye it's larger than the other... And it's a bit blocky. Other than that, awesome work! ^^ -------------------- Click here if you like Megaman Luishi (Main character) Necro Jlhgomez Some furry team stuff ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People who has drawn me: Jazz Yak (Jlhgomez) Razor SupaStixDude Gato YoshiFan GM Joe Inky (Boo, Secret Santa)

Yak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:36 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Thanks -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

Sonic_Penguin15	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:26 AM
Since all the funny member title puns are taken! Group: Members Posts: 1384 Member No.: 3243 Joined: 30-January 07 Status: (0d)	I agree, its too blockey. -------------------- *Current Sprite Sheets* Mario Bros.(W.I.P) Cranky Spritesheet Goomba Poke WIP

Yak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:35 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	Oh well, I don't think this will be submitted, but I can't seem to edit it, oh well, lock thread please. -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

Sonic_Penguin15	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:41 AM
Since all the funny member title puns are taken! Group: Members Posts: 1384 Member No.: 3243 Joined: 30-January 07 Status: (0d)	Just make the mask more circular, and it will be fine. -------------------- *Current Sprite Sheets* Mario Bros.(W.I.P) Cranky Spritesheet Goomba Poke WIP

Yak	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 02:51 AM
ME IS THE BLOAT! I JUST VOMIT ON YOU! Group: Members Posts: 1357 Member No.: 5505 Joined: 8-July 08 Status: (0d)	UPDATE: I fixed a few things on him -------------------- Yak Ref Yakki the Dragon Ref HAVE I DONE THE FAD RIGHT?

Neopolis

Posted: Aug 20 2008, 04:07 AM

Abandon ship!
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QUOTE (Jlhgomez @ Aug 20 2008, 06:34 AM)

One eye it's larger than the other...

That's normal, except the wrong eye is larger. The eye in the back is supposed to be smaller...

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Soiyeruda	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 05:53 AM
Because retarded looking women is fun. :S Group: Members Posts: 3589 Member No.: 5004 Joined: 6-March 08 Status: (0d)	It's not just the mask, it's also the body in general. My suggestion for a baby shy guy: 1) Don't give it a mouth. This'll make it appear more childish. 2) Make the cloak cover the shoes. Now, improvement: 1) The way you do your arms make them appear like regular arms. They don't look like they're covered by a cloak. 2) The spear seems to grow because the Shy Guy's arms don't move. 3) Make the red cloak go one pixel up above the mask.

Yak

Posted: Aug 20 2008, 10:22 PM

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QUOTE (Soiyeruda @ Aug 20 2008, 08:53 PM)

It's not just the mask, it's also the body in general. My suggestion for a baby shy guy:

1) Don't give it a mouth. This'll make it appear more childish.
2) Make the cloak cover the shoes.

Now, improvement:
1) The way you do your arms make them appear like regular arms. They don't look like they're covered by a cloak.
2) The spear seems to grow because the Shy Guy's arms don't move.
3) Make the red cloak go one pixel up above the mask.

Thanks Soy!

Black Boo	Posted: Aug 20 2008, 10:49 PM
I swear when I get my hands on him... Group: Members Posts: 3624 Member No.: 4777 Joined: 25-November 07 Status: (0d)	You should just make him poke in one direction, not have a spear out at all times. And it is indeed very blocky. -------------------- SGG was here

Soiyeruda	Posted: Aug 21 2008, 12:08 AM
Because retarded looking women is fun. :S Group: Members Posts: 3589 Member No.: 5004 Joined: 6-March 08 Status: (0d)	There's a YIDS Baby tutorial around the arts board somewhere. You should look at that. Also, the nickname "Soy" seems really gay on a forum to me. I'm guessing because once it's posted, it stays stuck, unlike in an MMO where it'll stay for like 3 seconds and never be seen again.

Yak

Posted: Aug 21 2008, 02:41 AM

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QUOTE (Soiyeruda @ Aug 21 2008, 03:08 PM)

There's a YIDS Baby tutorial around the arts board somewhere. You should look at that.

Also, the nickname "Soy" seems really gay on a forum to me. I'm guessing because once it's posted, it stays stuck, unlike in an MMO where it'll stay for like 3 seconds and never be seen again.

I can't seem to find it,

Techokami

Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:34 AM

Quit Stalin!
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QUOTE (Yak @ Aug 21 2008, 03:41 AM)

I can't seem to find it,

...and?
You posted an incomplete sentence. It's very annoying when someone does that,

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Techokami	Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:35 AM
Quit Stalin! Group: MFGG Security Ninja Posts: 7507 Member No.: 30 Joined: 13-October 03 Status: (0d)	Oh, and these need some work done to them. Brush up on your spriting skills and try again! --------------------

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