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Maybe this expresses what I mean.

Left is what Syrup looks like, and right is how your sprite seems to me.

Hows this?

The shading sucks, I'm not a spriter. But I think this looks more like Syrup's new reference, bandana-wise. (the top one)
The outline of the bandana is actually the continuation of the outline of her head-shape.
So this is how I got that.

I think it's fine now, but it's your call.

Pretty good.

The chest looks a bit odd, too. Like two circles stuck in there. Furthermore it looks like they take up her whole torso.
And the eye-shades are almost invisible. (< this might also just be my screen, so don't mind that if you think they are alright)

Don't want to get on your nerves, though, this is just what I see

Don't worry, there's a lot of problems with it - I'll keep working until I'm just it's perfect.

To be quite honest, the smaller bandanna makes it look worse. I'd say make it one pixel bigger, and work on the chest. Otherwise, I love it

This has to be edit 1000 of this sprite
I still don't think it looks perfect

Now the bandana is even smaller than before. =(

Actually it isn't, the hair is covering it.
But I thought you wanted it small :[
And I don't what looks better, small or big <:o

Small looks better, but not if the hair covers it all.

->

Hows this?
Like in the reference, I shifted the hair that's in front of the bandana a bit to the right. You might try this.

EDIT: I'm going to bed now.. Can't stay up anylonger. I hope you do some good work while I sleep ...

This post has been edited by Guinea on Aug 30 2008, 04:58 PM

Made the bandana bigger.
Made the lips bigger.
Improved the hair and legs and arms.
Made the bust more reasonable.
Made the belt and necklace more recognizable.
Fixed the legs and shoes a bit more.
Gave her a bit of a smirk as well.

This post has been edited by Fawfulhasfury on Aug 30 2008, 05:11 PM

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Alright, I think I got it pretty good now using a combination of everybody's edits.
Sorry Fawfulhasfury, but I don't really like what you did with the face. Though, I like what you did with the legs and stuff, so I kept that in.

I might be done editing this.

I think the chest needs a less bright pink for the shading. Other then that, I like it.

This good?

I made a Wizard Goom. I don't like the shading on the bottom half of the robe though.

Yeah, it looks a bit bland, as it's almost only one color for the whole thing..
This needs to be solved.
The lineart looks nice, though.

I'd need some help, that was the best I could get it unfortunately(The bottom half of the robe, I think the rest looks okay). I think it's also missing the eye holes in the robe too(Since a Wizard Goom is 2 Gooms standing on top of each other).

How's this?
I added the eyes around the height a normal goom has its eyes and made the bottom half more round, so it looks more like two guys.