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Posted: Oct 15 2009, 08:41 PM
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I don't like the main hill. The other ones are fine though.

The snow seems to unnatural and blocky on the closest one (in the middle) with the other ones, the snow is longer and seems to flow around the hill. it seems more pasted on on this one though.

The shading on the hills also bugs me a bit. it just seems gradient, rather than the hill being round. It also looks awkward when beside the snow, because of the amount of shades, with the snow have very few visible shades.

The shading on the top of the hills also needs to blend it with the sky, because it's sticking out, and looks a bit odd. just replace the shade with something that fits better with the sky.


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Posted: Oct 15 2009, 08:47 PM
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QUOTE (Fez @ Oct 15 2009, 08:41 PM)
I don't like the main hill. The other ones are fine though.

The snow seems to unnatural and blocky on the closest one (in the middle) with the other ones, the snow is longer and seems to flow around the hill. it seems more pasted on on this one though.

The shading on the hills also bugs me a bit. it just seems gradient, rather than the hill being round. It also looks awkward when beside the snow, because of the amount of shades, with the snow have very few visible shades.

The shading on the top of the hills also needs to blend it with the sky, because it's sticking out, and looks a bit odd. just replace the shade with something that fits better with the sky.

I don't do landscapes.


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Posted: Oct 15 2009, 08:53 PM
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I might try to change it a bit (not tonight because of homework) but I'm not background expert, so we'll see how it turns out.


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Posted: Oct 15 2009, 10:43 PM
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ugh i'm sorry ;________________________;

i've been so busy with school, sports, art, and other issues lately that i've not had the time...

i can pixel one bg if you need me too real bad! this weekend, i can, i think, so tell me what i need to do.


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Posted: Oct 16 2009, 02:30 AM
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QUOTE (Dex @ Oct 16 2009, 04:43 AM)
ugh i'm sorry ;________________________;

i've been so busy with school, sports, art, and other issues lately that i've not had the time...

i can pixel one bg if you need me too real bad! this weekend, i can, i think, so tell me what i need to do.

Underground. That would be awesome. smile.gif

If you need a demo to get the feeling, contact me.
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Posted: Oct 16 2009, 05:34 AM
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Grey, while your BG looks good and all, it doesn't scroll horizontally and the green lines on the left and top serve no purpose.
If you want to support GM's bottom-left transparency thing, you must put a green line on the bottom, otherwise it makes no sense for horizontally scrolling BGs.

This is information for everyone who wants to make BGs, btw.


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Since you said they're free to modify, here we go:
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Fixed Snow

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And seperate sky for teh paralax.

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Posted: Oct 16 2009, 12:32 PM
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I said in my post that the green lines were there on accident.


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Posted: Oct 16 2009, 02:06 PM
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QUOTE (Shyguy Grey @ Oct 16 2009, 06:32 PM)
I said in my post that the green lines were there on accident.

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Hey guys I suck at backgrounds!


Also I left a green pixel line on the left and top


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Posted: Oct 16 2009, 02:17 PM
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Haha, I stopped typing mid sentence and posted it.



Well yeah, I meant to say it was there on accident anyways.


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Posted: Oct 21 2009, 04:47 PM
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Guinea said we needed this for the fireflower

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Didn't add under water poses since they would be moving nonstop anyways so to add a specific pose would look kinda jumpy.

Wario doesn't have one since he just makes a flame from his hat as he walks and what not.


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Posted: Oct 22 2009, 05:14 PM
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Posted: Nov 1 2009, 11:05 AM
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smaller wiggler sprites


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:22 PM
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I'll probably fix it up some later, but I'm tired of him right now so don't bug me with it right now please.


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:23 PM
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probably the best thing you've sprited


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:29 PM
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god dammit grey ;_;


The amount of work you've put into this is astonishing, and everything is really high quality. I don't know how you do it man.


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:37 PM
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WOW, just wow


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:43 PM
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Beautiful.

Only thing that bothers me is the eyes on the clown copter when it's facing sideways. The eye touching the edge of the copter should look more like it's wrapping around it.


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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 09:45 PM
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to be blunt i don't really like the clown copter, i think it could use some smoothening, tweaks, and some more depth

but yea good work



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Posted: Nov 5 2009, 10:01 PM
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QUOTE (Dex @ Nov 5 2009, 09:45 PM)
to be blunt i don't really like the clown copter, i think it could use some smoothening, tweaks, and some more depth

but yea good work

Thats one of the things I plan on fixing first. The one there now is a place holder if nothing else.


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Posted: Nov 6 2009, 05:40 AM
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Cool stuff, Grey. =)
I can't wait to see that Bowser in action!
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