PJ Fear competition entry wip

shark idk



heavy wip

Holy poop this is godly. I can't wait to see that finished.

Raytheon from PT?(if so it's dark kamek :P) Glad to see your still pixellin. I'd love to see this finished.

You could reduce the color count a lot, half the colors you got are pretty similar. Also, the lines are jagged. But I like it.

i don't have much time to finish it but this is very nearly finished

I see you listen to critique pretty well!

YOU'RE ONE TO TALK!

I, for one, have no problem with many colours on big pieces. :S

Many colors in any piece isn't really a bad thing, as long as it looks good.

If you check a good number of my recent-est topics, you'll see that I in fact HAVE taken critique and applied it, even from you. Geez.

This post has been edited by Dex on Aug 23 2008, 07:22 PM

Hey i did that update before anyone posted in my topic :I



I will finish the sprite at a later date but this is the entered version:

Wow, that's awesome. The shading looks...pronounced, but I'm guessing that's just part of the style. Anyway, I can't think of any better way to do it.

The Shark isn't necessarily big. Also, less colors give's it a neater, slicker feel.
Personally, the only thing I find weird about it is the placement of the fins, but other than that, amazing work.

Very nice