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Posted: Aug 23 2008, 04:33 PM
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I made a sprite comic a while back inspired by Peardian's "Kirby Vs Shy-Guy" called "Mishaps of Dreamland". I made 20 strips since July, and I'd thought I should share it on MFGG.

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(This one is based off of how Kirby can eat explosives in Brawl)

Aaaanndd...that's it so far. I'll post more issues as soon as I make some. ohmy.gif You can also keep track of them here.


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Posted: Aug 23 2008, 04:38 PM
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These aren't half bad; kind of remind me of a comic I used to do.


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Posted: Aug 23 2008, 06:05 PM
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That was funny... Nice job man. I love the retro-replacements.


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Posted: Aug 23 2008, 06:09 PM
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Haha, thanks! I'll probably have another strip posted sometime tomorrow, in case people are wondering.


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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 05:41 AM
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Lol!
Why do coconuts explode?


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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 07:20 AM
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Coconuts are basically bombs in the Kirby games. When Kirby is under one, they fall and explode on him. laugh.gif


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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 08:20 AM
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I lied.
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Cool, I like these. They're pretty good. (And right when I'm making my Kirby flash too, very convenient!) I had a good laugh at them.


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Posted: Aug 24 2008, 12:24 PM
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You need to get off your high horse.
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It's generally unfunny, but you should keep going. The humor gets gradually better.


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Posted: Aug 30 2008, 02:55 PM
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#21 - Clouds, is up and ready:

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It's the first 6 panel strip in the series.


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Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:02 PM
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Because retarded looking women is fun. :S
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The humor varies greatly between different sets, but overall, not too shabby.

You seem to use the typical smart-idiot scenario, which kinda gets old for me.
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Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:06 PM
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Eat your veggies.
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I've seen these on Kirby's Rainbow Resort a while back. I had a good laugh at them. Keep them up.


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Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:39 PM
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Well, your local psychic is off to visit your mother!
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I laughed at the "we have telekinesis some don't" one, that was pretty clever at the end, but your last one has been done multiple times over; even in a Skittles commercial.

The humor is poor in some areas, good in others, and some is just "wink wink lol" humor that only some people can get (the exploding coconut one for example, only people who play Kirby games will get that, everyone else will be "huh?" at it).


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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 12:22 PM
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Pretty funny


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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 12:52 PM
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Here's another new one, #22 - Light Ability

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Also, thanks for the criticism, it really helps. smile.gif


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