This mushroom, it is my home!

This may sound like common knowledge, but always try to perfect the lineart and get the perspective right before adding color, shading, etc.

Very nice pixel art though. I absolutely love it.

This post has been edited by General on Aug 31 2008, 07:16 PM

Stalk could be a little wider at the top (maybe not as wide as Delmore's)
Either make it a circle on both sides of the cap or an ellipse on both sides (preferably ellipse)
Somewhat shorten side in the background of the cap (it looks like the stalk is off center, too close to the front)
Should be less space in between the gills of the mushroom (in case you don't know, those are the flaps under the cap)

That's just my opinion. It's much better than anything I could do, though.

... That changes the shape of the entire thing.

That's pretty much just restarting the project.

Well, not really. The main problems of it are the PERFECTLY STRAIGHT LINES (what the hell, Dex) and the bent stalk--those shouldn't take too much work to fix, and will fix pretty much all the problems that Delmore's preaching

Ahoy there

Fatten up the bump on the right a bit.

That is excellent work, Dex. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it.