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My first attempt at a YIDS sprite, Huffin Pufin!

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Weston404	Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:35 PM
Cool beans Group: Members Posts: 956 Member No.: 3784 Joined: 19-May 07 Status: (0d)	Feet taken from Mageker's Fat Guy's rips, and pallet from Ragey's Yoshi Rips. I know it's terrible, but please give me suggestions on how I can fix it. -------------------- If a pokemon breaks it's legs, does that mean it can't sleep?

GeneralGuy	Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:37 PM
ShyGuy Leader Group: Members Posts: 11192 Member No.: 2505 Joined: 15-August 06 Status: (0d)	It looks kind of flat. Add some shading to give it dimension. --------------------

Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:43 PM

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QUOTE (General @ Aug 30 2008, 08:37 PM)

It looks kind of flat. Add some shading to give it dimension.

I guess I could do that, but I already have alot already, what part(s) are you talking about?

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If a pokemon breaks it's legs, does that mean it can't sleep?

Yoshbert	Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:46 PM
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QUOTE (Weston404 @ Aug 30 2008, 08:43 PM)

I guess I could do that, but I already have alot already, what part(s) are you talking about?

The entire sprite. If you've already added shading, then use more contrast to make it more noticable and stand out.

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Weston404	Posted: Aug 30 2008, 08:57 PM
Cool beans Group: Members Posts: 956 Member No.: 3784 Joined: 19-May 07 Status: (0d)	Added more shading and fixed the feet, I coulda swore I mirrored them... This post has been edited by Weston404 on Aug 30 2008, 09:02 PM -------------------- If a pokemon breaks it's legs, does that mean it can't sleep?

Weston404	Posted: Aug 30 2008, 10:02 PM
Cool beans Group: Members Posts: 956 Member No.: 3784 Joined: 19-May 07 Status: (0d)	Sorry for Double post, but... Forgot to shade the pants, and also, Small Huffin Puffin get! -------------------- If a pokemon breaks it's legs, does that mean it can't sleep?

Weston404	Posted: Aug 31 2008, 01:23 AM
Cool beans Group: Members Posts: 956 Member No.: 3784 Joined: 19-May 07 Status: (0d)	Triple post, very sorry, but... WHAT'S THIS? THEY'RE WALKING? -------------------- If a pokemon breaks it's legs, does that mean it can't sleep?

Frogjester	Posted: Aug 31 2008, 07:00 AM
2 colours are all I need Group: Members Posts: 2251 Member No.: 2336 Joined: 15-July 06 Status: (0d)	I'm afraid you were beaten to it by Artoon. I'd try smoothing the lines a bit, they look far too jagged. Also, the big one's body shouldn't bob up and down like that while walking. -------------------- My Cave Story style ref

Mr. Bird	Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:32 AM
SUPAH DUPAH Group: Members Posts: 1402 Member No.: 4601 Joined: 20-October 07 Status: (0d)	Make all of them walk like the big puffin. ALso make him slightly bouncy when he walks too. :3 -------------------- YES Let me have just a nibble at your brain.. Ref

Fuzzy	Posted: Aug 31 2008, 12:23 PM
Group: Members Posts: 2411 Member No.: 3024 Joined: 7-December 06 Status: (0d)	Although this would look nice for the regular YI game, the DS version is somewhat different, rather than having a pastel sort of design to the characters, its more smooth like watercolors. Try using AA on the outline whereas you had created a jaggy more than on pixel thick outline in some areas. -------------------- Old Custom Picture Book Scans