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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:04 PM
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Nothing much to say on this one.... but I really like how this came out :D

C+C if you wish.

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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:08 PM
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Her left leg looks pretty short, and the perspective of her arm in relation to the angle is funky.


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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:09 PM
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I'm gonna get in here and actually crit this before everyone else gives you verbal head.

Anatomy has a bunch of slip-ups. The main one I noticed was the right leg: the calf is way too big. The right breast is, in contrast, really damn small--it looks like a pec, to be honest. Finally, I hate the mouth: it needs more emotion and looks really awkward to be that cartoony on such an anatomy-oriented piece.

The coloring and general art are amazing, though. Good job on this 8D


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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:10 PM
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QUOTE (Mr. Aforcer @ Sep 1 2008, 01:08 AM)
Her left leg looks pretty short, and the perspective of her arm in relation to the angle is funky.

Those... are things I can't fix easily. :x

yeah, it has a few problems in it, but all the art that I've seen aren't perfect.
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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:13 PM
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QUOTE (Ashura @ Aug 31 2008, 06:10 PM)
yeah, it has a few problems in it, but all the art that I've seen aren't perfect.

That's no reason to avoid trying to get as close as you damn well can!


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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:15 PM
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QUOTE (MetalMan @ Sep 1 2008, 01:13 AM)
That's no reason to avoid trying to get as close as you damn well can!

I know :( I really don't want to rework on this.... but your feedback is important to me, as I'll avoid those mistakes next time :]
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Posted: Aug 31 2008, 08:42 PM
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What everyone else said. Also, the way the palms of the hands are shaped look awkward to me, but that's just me. The left leg seems to be connected in a weird way.

Very good though, nothetheless.
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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:26 AM
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Personally I don't have a problem with the anatomy, so then there's the actual drawing, which I think looks just absolutely amazing! The shading, the style, the texture, all looks very good. I also like the sparkly background.


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:31 AM
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I've seen oversized sleeves in several designs.. Is that official? I'm not sure.

Either way, stunning job!


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 06:49 AM
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it's cool but i think you should move the eyes/mouth a bit up? idk
and yeah, the right leg looks weird, too long/big


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 08:15 AM
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I think the awkward anatomy works. Gives the whole dynamic feel :P

Fantastic work btw.


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