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> A Cap in the Clouds, *finished*
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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 03:56 PM
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This is really awesome, I love the way you did the sky and the front mushroom. It has a very original touch and the color palette used makes it look realistic.

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The ladder wired around the mushroom doesn't seem to have any dept. Same goes for the mushroom behind the front one, on the right.



There, I praised your picture, AND gave constructive critism.


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 03:58 PM
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That is an amazing piece of pixel art, Dex. The shading is very well done, the texturing is pretty detailed, the low saturated pallette with hue shifting is also excellent. The lineart is pretty decent too.

And disregard the C+C here, since what they pointed out is very minor and all comes down to preference.


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QUOTE (Dex @ Sep 1 2008, 12:49 PM)
Sorry krem, it just annoys me when certain people don't understand what I'm trying to do with my art.

That's what the Eternity's Child guy said.
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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:02 PM
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QUOTE (Shawn @ Sep 1 2008, 12:10 PM)
The vine is so flat and unnecessary. The actual hue shifting on the cap is awful. The actual lineart still seems line-y and messed up to me and it doesn't look very even. I'm also not sure what that light spot near the top of the.. stem is, and that blue flower thing is really just bad.

Let's see you do a better job. =D


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:04 PM
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QUOTE (General @ Sep 1 2008, 04:02 PM)
Let's see you do a better job. =D

Okay so if you think something looks bad, you're not entitled to that opinion unless you can outdo it? He is just giving some feedback here.
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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:04 PM
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QUOTE (General @ Sep 1 2008, 11:02 PM)
Let's see you do a better job. =D

Dude, he's just trying to help the guy in improving, not offending his work in any way.
He's just pointing out these flaws so he won't do them again next time.

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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:05 PM
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QUOTE (General @ Sep 1 2008, 04:02 PM)
Let's see you do a better job. =D

Shut it, boy.

I ****ing hate that kind of attitude. Whether I can do a better job or not has nothing to do with this ****. I'm giving proper criticism and if you people can't accept that, fine! I'm not saying I can kick Dex' ass at spriting (maybe I can? Idk!), but I'm trying to help him improve his piece.


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QUOTE (Shawn @ Sep 1 2008, 11:05 PM)
Shut it, boy.

I ****ing hate that kind of attitude. Whether I can do a better job or not has nothing to do with this ****.

Calling his work **** won't help your image either


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QUOTE (MechaBowser @ Sep 1 2008, 04:07 PM)
Calling his work **** won't help your image either

I dunno, kinda seemed more like he was just referring to the whole scenario as ****, although maybe that's just the avatar making me think that!
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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:08 PM
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this **** = this situation, not his art


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oh sorry I must've misunderstood it then


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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 04:32 PM
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QUOTE (General @ Sep 1 2008, 10:02 PM)
Let's see you do a better job. =D

You can't be a food critic unless you cook well?
You can't review games unless you make them yourself?
You can't say whether a piece of music is good or not unless you can play an instrument?

Wow life is A *****.

Anyway, Dex: I see where your coming from, when you put a lot of hard work into things the last thing you want is critisism, but you should take it in and experiment with your piece some more even if you are sick with doing it. Its worth the effort and will reflect on your future pieces. Even if shawn was very harsh, but hes like that when it comes to pixels.

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Posted: Sep 1 2008, 06:34 PM
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Well

It's fun to see what happens when I leave for two hours

Wow

Thanks anyways all you guys...


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