Alien Sprites, My Character

[Mokun]

I've planned to start a game staring my character, however I have barley any programming skills.
Anyway, this dude is basically an alien astronaut.
So, yeah... C+C.

This post has been edited by shymouse on Sep 5 2008, 09:02 PM

[Demonlemon]

Is he supposed to be abnormally tall and skinny?

anyway I like the shading.

[Mokun]

Yeah, he was supposed to be tall and skinny, sort-of like Waluigi.

[Dex]

lineart's kinda sketchy, and the AA isn't that great

The pose is also kinda boring :/

[Mokun]

Is this any better?



This post has been edited by shymouse on Sep 5 2008, 10:16 PM

[Dex]

here's a quick sketchover on how you could make the pose more interesting

hope you don't mind





This post has been edited by Dex on Sep 5 2008, 10:26 PM

[Mokun]

Nice! Thanks Dex, you are being a huge help :)

I'm going to try shading it in the morning.

[Sword]

It's not terrible, you just gotta mix it up with the poses. No one stands that straight.

This post has been edited by Sword on Sep 6 2008, 08:27 AM

[Mokun]

Okay, I tried shading it, does it look better now?



This post has been edited by shymouse on Sep 13 2008, 12:14 PM

[Sword]

Purdy good. Try animating the idle sprites to breathe life into it.

[Mokun]

I'm going to start animating after people give me more criticism, that way I don't have to go back and edit something about the actual sprite, instead of the animation.

[Frogjester]

I'm not a fan of the dithering on the horns, it doesn't really fit in my opinion. It's good though, but try and make your poses more dynamic and make them a bit better anatomically(As Dex sorta said), though the fixed version is good as is.

This post has been edited by Frogjester on Sep 6 2008, 01:35 PM