General Guy's Mech, Drawing comp entry

I aimed for a PMTTYD/Pm feel for this drawing.

I know Mario's shoulder and arm look kinda funny, that's because I misread the line while inking...ah, the joys of poor eyesight.

I speant about 3-5 hours on sketch/inks, and 2-4 hours on colors.

Edit: Brighter version

So C+C plz.

This post has been edited by Black Boo on Sep 12 2008, 09:19 PM

It's pretty good.

In terms of the actually character, the robot should probably be more toyish. Like having a wind up key, and little spheres conecting the hands, that or springs.

But for the comps theme, I guess this would be more fitting.

You should've added more to the background, which looks really empty. It's suppose to look more lively and colorful. Also, I feel you could've fixed up Mario's expression a bit more. Pretty good though, nothetheless.

The competition really IS getting tougher. No! AAAHHH!!!!!

Not the area where you face General Guy. It's actually rather dark.

I know. I played it yesterday and the day before.

This post has been edited by Black Boo on Sep 12 2008, 09:22 PM