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  Posted: Sep 15 2008, 08:02 PM
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Uh I guess you can give me some ideas, ways to improve it.

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Posted: Sep 15 2008, 11:40 PM
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It's been real
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I'd try making the sides of the head rounder


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Posted: Sep 16 2008, 12:10 PM
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Where the head joins the body, it looks like a frown. This is not OK for the glad goomba.


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mariobro27 Pikax and love are not compatible, OK?
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Ike Bravo
Posted: Sep 16 2008, 03:28 PM
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Wow, these are actually pretty good! I like them. But I have to agree with mariobro27, you'd probably want to have the head overlap the body.


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Posted: Sep 16 2008, 04:47 PM
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Because retarded looking women is fun. :S
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To me, it doesn't appear frowny.

Anyways:

- Add more color contrast (being able to clearly tell 2 shades apart), especially on yellow. Instead of using darker shades of yellow, try moving into a yellow-orange a tiny bit.
- Increase the size a bit. They're pretty small right now

I can't really say much, considering they're small, and, to be honest, I consider them pretty poor quality. Keep working though.

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Posted: Sep 16 2008, 04:59 PM
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These got accepted. On my next sprite sheet I'll try all of your ideas! Thanks for the comments!


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