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My Drawing Comp Entry, Geno versus Shadow

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Zero Chronii	Posted: Sep 16 2008, 01:23 PM
My name is not Blood Ninji Group: Members Posts: 682 Member No.: 5434 Joined: 20-June 08 Status: (0d)	This is mah entry. -------------------- Reference -------------------- I have been drawn by: dsguru, Dark Yoshi, thingy, Gauffin, Yak --------------------

Simoneister	Posted: Sep 18 2008, 05:49 AM
Left Group: Members Posts: 1403 Member No.: 3282 Joined: 9-February 07 Status: (0d)	The design is good, but the shading really needs some work. There's an inconsistent light source, and they don't really fit with the shapes of the objects. Fix that up and it should be fine. --------------------

GeneralGuy	Posted: Sep 18 2008, 08:33 PM
ShyGuy Leader Group: Members Posts: 11192 Member No.: 2505 Joined: 15-August 06 Status: (0d)	Your light source should be from above and not below the image. Also, the shading could be smoother. --------------------

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