AND THEN WE ALL SAID ~Rawr

Nitty study, attemptin to be like mah hero. To bad i suck.

EDIT: fixed it, image is up, not a flame of me.

This post has been edited by HtraM on Oct 25 2008, 04:20 PM

The shading is really off but the lineart is looking nice i guess. mind if i attempt to shade it myself?

Feel free to shade if you want to man :3. I kinda rushed the color job.

im no nitram when it comes to shading or anatomy but this should help

This post has been edited by Shawn on Oct 25 2008, 05:05 PM

The face here is just lovely =D

major major help. Thanks man :3.

design change, more human now.

Some people comment my style is like Nitty's, so I suppose my edit is like Nitty's. I circled what I did in green.



-Yours is too blocky, although people say his style is blocky, its not that blocky!
-The brightest color doesnt work in nitty's style, its just too bright, most of his colors are dull dull dull.
-Normally his outlines arent as dark as yours.
-I changed some anatomy problems, although the pixel itself confuse me.


I also recommend not copying the legs, each leg on everything has some differences you know.

what kind of mutated humans do you hang out with?!

Alright first off, the body is just awful. the shading makes no sense and it's like a bubbly piece of ****. Don't tell me how to do anatomy, when you don't know any more than I do. I don't use perfect anatomy in my art but I still know what I'm doing. Your take on the leg has no real depth, the outlines are shaded in a way that literally makes no sense and the style is much farther than Nitrams than it was before.

tl;dr, i'm a god and your leg looks like a tumor

XD

Anyways, I hope my edit can help marth a little.