~Mirage~, [New Song]

I made these for a game a week or two ago but never got around to posting them.

This is a remix of one of my earlier songs, which also happens to be the first song I've ever composed. I don't know what this reminds me of other than uhh... nothing really. It feels a little empty to me though. Could use some more bass or a pad or something. This took around 3 hours to make. It was also rushed because I tried to get it done before a certain time limit.

And this one was made with an ice dungeon in mind with dripping ice stalactites and crystal walls. I think it could have done without the second key change, and I probably ruined the ending in an attempt to make it loop somewhat. I like how it sounds though :3. I think this one took about 5 hours.

So yeah comments please as I do not like seeing 200 views and no replies

This post has been edited by Pikaboo on Nov 17 2008, 10:55 PM

The first one sounds like the kind of music you'd find in a flash game, or in one of those tutorial collabs they have tons of on NG. But that's not a bad thing, it sounds pretty cool.

The second one didn't really seem to have an "ice dungeon" type of feel to it at first, but it definitely did after I continued to listen to it. The water-dropping sound effects fit in pretty nicely, too.

So, nice stuff, they both sound pretty cool.

These are awesome.

Pikaboo, never stop making music.

Excellent job

I wish I could compose like you :<

Thanks for the comments guys!

And thingy, I don't plan to ;D

The first one is awesome, it sounds all cyber, and the second one is amazing as well.

Neew Music time!

/(Mirage)\

This one was based on one of my old melodies that I made a while ago by playing on the keyboard. I've been wanting to make a song with it for a while now, but never got around to it, until today.
It sounds to me like it tells the story of a day in a scorching hot desert, everlasting heat, the only thing changing is the color of the sky.

6 hours' on and off work.

I've already given you comments and critique on AIM, but let me just post that I love the conveying of a desert theme in that song!

I love Mirage the best out of all of these. It reminds me a lot of a desert-type area. Great work on these!

all of em really nice. i wish i could compose like u also PLZ PLZ PLZ tell me what program u use to make this stuff. i tried game making and drawing and failed misrably at them (im still trying with the gaming tho) and have dicided to try composing again (have tried it in the past) so a link to a download of it would be awsome

Quit ****ing bumping old threads, this is nearly a year old